Some Artworks...

[Ynlraey]

@rexxzecutioner I think because of his clothes =P

@nanao That's weird, I didn't exactly copied his post *tilts her head* I just used phantom brave and disgaea for references because G-man told us that it's the style we should emulate. And anyone can do that kind of pose, I mean, it's so common

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[nanao]

Are you sure... :thumbsup02: you can't say it's common though. Don't worry you have a lot of things to come to you and stuffs you'll learn in the future. There's rarely inspiration these days unlike before though...

 

[Ynlraey]

Does he really look like Prince Laharl's Pose?
...maybe I should change it

But thank you nanao ^^

 

[nanao]

no prob! Yeah, and it's maybe because prince Laharl is one of my fave chars that's why I kinda recognize it. You don't need to change it, just don't usually put watermark on something you think would be resembling something else, it's just that there's some things that might be trouble. xD I actually like disgaea style so it's actually nice you emulate it so no prob for me.

Oh, what's your da, I just feel like adding you, although I don't go there at all. :thumbsup02:

Btw, that char above who is she is she some of your game char? What did you use to draw it, and is that a wing? kinda elegant looking hehe ^^

 

[rexxzecutioner]

@rexxzecutioner I think because of his clothes =P

Well, following the curvature of his spine in the skelatal structure, he definitely appears to be having a problem there.

 

[Ynlraey]

@Rexxzecutioner O.o Well I did use a reference, so...oh well XD
@Nanao, it's http://enexodia.deviantart.com and yes, she's my ultimate game character etc. etc. etc. She's actually me in my ultimate form ^^

 

[Ynlraey]

Another update :P
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[Ratty524]

Looks great. I don't know what the hell is going on, but it definitely looks great.

 

[Ynlraey]

Here's a new one :D

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[Atnas]

Oh wow that is lovely! (I recently had the pleasure of spriting Saber, so I knew who that is. If I hadn't, I'd pass it off as randomness :D)

 

[Venetia]

Those manga pages (I assume are out of order/missing pages, since the story doesn't really follow cohesively) are quite dynamic and are drawn well. Your lettering/text boxes need a lot of work, but the art is solid and the flow of frames in the pages is excellent.

Stylish/script fonts shouldn't be used in comics. Serifs are frowned on, too. But never use Comic Sans. Find a good font on the net. That other sans serif on the top pages doesn't fit the style of the art.

The art has no antialiasing but the text bubbles do. That's a style clash. The bubbles are also too large to accomodate the text.

 

[Ynlraey]

@Venetia, the story is really made that way (confusing and bleh :D) As for the whole thing it was really rushed because it was ahead deadline The whole purpose of the story is to show Reality Nightmare for our Art Tournament :x

(The only missing pages were after arc said "After all" and when she was killed by the Death Tarot Card if I'm not mistaken)

 

[Ynlraey]

New Crap

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Poster I made for this http://www.gamingw.net/forums/index.php?topic=63356.0

There are 2 missing character though...dang!

 

[linkz0r]

I'd like to give life to my faces like you do with yours... T.T

 

[Ynlraey]

What do you mean Linkin T?
You're good

 

[linkz0r]

It?s because you have more of a manga-style. Your faces seems to have more expression than my regular anime faces. That?s what i was trying to say ^^

 

[Ynlraey]

Some boring Sketches

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I can't sleep last night and this are all escapee drafts XD

 

[Venetia]

You do a great job with faces; you should consider really "finishing" one of these things. By that I mean, clean the messy lines, color it completely, and add finishing touches to it. Everything I've seen has either been stuck in unrefined-pen or halfway-Photoshopped limbo.

 

[Ynlraey]

Ah, those are just doodles for different angles
And I'll try to do what you said

 

[Ynlraey]

Well another one XD

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Character concept art for my game :p