Silent Chaos I: Cry of the Sky

[Sieghart]

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Hi, Im Hanzo Kimura as you can see my name is japanese
but im not a full japanese =p, im a Half Filipino(Philippines)
And Half Japanese(Japan).And im presenting my very first project.
sorry for my bad grammars, it seems that i am not yet a
perfect english speaker/writter xD hehehehe well lets talk about
this project... (sorry for uploading so many pictures) (The picture might upload slow
because there are many images in this project so it might look attractive to all)

Spoiler: Introduction

this is my very first project that i will present in the
forums(as mentioned above)...
the other projects here are quite attractive to
look so hope my Game Logo looks attractive like others .

its not only the game logo will look attractive...
the story will be an attractive and wondering what will
happen next..

Before i tell you the story, i want to tell you guys
that im in deep need of Staffs right now...
Though im the only one who made this project(Yes only me...
I have no partners )Check the Recruitment Section for any
Free Space for staffs...

I need an Original Concept arts(Manga Ofcourse),For a Scenery
in the project...I know lots of people here in the forums
are talented.

Well this story just pops up in my mind... and just added
every story when i feel like continuing it.The Story involves
about Love, Friendship, Faith, Comedy, Action, Drama, Betrayal,
Death as for short this is a MultiGenre Story.

Im hoping that you will like this project,
And im hoping for your time to read this topic
Thanks again...
Anyway This is the Story...
You may notice that some names came from the game "Chaos Legion"
Then yes it was... But its only the name... The story and the Game itself is not similar
to Chaos Legion

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Spoiler: Story

THE VERY BEGINNING(Not the start of the game)

A Prophet appeared in the castle of Yzarc Telling the king
that a Disaster will come in the Entire kingdom of Sparda.
This Disaster is made by a Cursed Girl.The Cursed Girl
must be killed by a Chaos Child before the 18th year of this girl,
A Chaos Child will be born in the Chaos Temple this night
Also this night, the Cursed girl will be born. but no one knows
who will give a birth and where she will be born.
The king quickly lead his mens in the chaos temple for the born
of the so called "Chaos child". When the king and his men
were in the temple they saw a shooting star strikes infront
of the "Great Altar of Chaos" The prophet appeared and shocked
after he saw that there is a twin "Chaos Child" Born
the prophet gave the child to the king and told him to raise
the children for fighting arts they know.
The king return back to the castle, While in the other event
Maria was giving a birth to a child in her house.
After the born was child, A Dark Wizard suddenly appeared
and steal the baby and disappear.The Wizard teleports to the
Open field of the capital city of Yzarc. He casted the Cursed Spell
to the girl that will bring darkness to the kingdom in her 18th bday
The Darkwizard left the baby in the field and a Man heared the
baby's cry. The man adopted the baby as his own daughter...
Few days after, the Dark wizard appeared in the room where
the "Chaos Children" were resting.Though he cant kill the
"Chaos Children" by his barehands he casted a spell to one of
the Children and then relocated near a house outside the Capital City
The "Chaos Children" is now Seperated from each other...
A Soldier Leader named "Arjon" saw a baby appeared just beside him
He adopted this baby and named him "Sieghart"
The King dont know what to do when the other baby was lost but he
tightly keeping the Chaos Child left to him.And named him "Vincent"


So the Twin Chaos Childrens name are "Sieghart" and "Vincent".
And the Cursed Baby's name was not mentioned yet...
Thats just the beginning, which is not the start of the story in the
game...
The game Starts in the end of the whole story plot
where we will flashback all the event happens before that ending...
which will make the player wonder =p...

Now here is a Summary for the whole story in the game.

SUMMARY
(in their 17th Age)
Sieghart is a Soldier in the Castle of Yzarc he was secretly falling
inlove with his childhood friend named "Seila", But sad to say
Seila moved with her father to the "Sacred City of Azrael"
But Sieghart promise to visit her sometimes,Sieghart was assigned
to escort Prince Vincent(Oh my God!! his Twin brother, but they both
dont know they are twins YET! =p)again...Sieghart was assigned to
escort Prince Vincent a important meeting in the Sacred City of Azrael
(Wow! finally he would be able to see Seila soon)
When the time that they arrived the Sacred City of Azrael they directly
attended the meeting of the Kingdoms.After the meeting, Sieghart and Vincent
Ehem!!.. I mean Prince Vincent Rest for the night...
but that night, an Underattack happened leading them both to fight the intruders. Prince Vincent was wounded by an attack of one of the intruders
and Sieghart quickly help him. after the intruding ended... the prophet appeared infront of them both... telling Prince Vincent that Sieghart is his
Long lost twinbrother that used to be a Prince of Yzarc too...
Ofcourse Sieghart and Prince Vincent Shock not knowing that they have
the same blood flowing thru their veins. The Prophet told them that
he already told the king that Sieghart and Prince Vincent is the Twin
Chaos Children...
They headed back to Yzarc and Sieghart live to the castle starting that day
Back to the Main Aim of the Chaos Children the king called the princes
to give their main objective... the king told them both that they must
find the Cursed girl immediately before the Girl turns 18...or else
the kingdom of Sparda will become a history, a legend...
Prince vincent and Prince Sieghart Team up and Travel all over
the Kingdom to find the Cursed girl... The only sign to identify the cursed
girl is to see if a "Cross Angelic Sign" is tattooed in her back
They must kill the Cursed girl Mercyless. In the middle of their Journey
They decided to split up to find the cursed girl with more ease...
Sieghart Redirected to The Sacred City of Azrael, to visit seila for a while
and to find information about the cursed girl.
When Sieghart arrived to the city... He saw seila with other guy
Sieghart quickly come to seila and ask whose that guy...
Seila introduced her Protector.He's name is "Raiden Fury"
Sieghart is a little Jealous in the guy, and wondered why does
seila need a protector?, Seila answered that those days
many crimes happens...
FLASH FLASH FLASH!!
Oh so many scenes and i cant mention them all xD
okay okay back to the story...
this is the main idea of the story

Sieghart Realizes that Seila IS the "Cursed Girl"
Leading him to a final decision if
he can kill the one he loved all his life
or protect her to be killed by his own hands OR
his TWIN BROTHER hands...
Find out what will be the end of the story

Thats the Shortest brief i can tell you guys
hope you quite understand the story
And tell me something that will add spice to the story
dont hesitate to give me tips
im here to learn and to improve my skills
They are just the Main Characters
In the game you will find many good Friends
that might join your party for the journey
and might stay as a permanent member of the party
Now let me give you an Introduction to the Characters
Now notice my Title Logo, why there was two Guy logo behind the Title?
Answer:
it is because they are twins =p

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Spoiler: Characters

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Spoiler: Screenshots::Systems

-The Title Screen-
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-Battle System-
-Decision Phase-(Fight Selection)(Animated)
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-Decision Phase-(Switching from Fight to Escape)(Animated)
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-Tactic Phase-(Tactic Selections)
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-Target Phase-(Selecting the target)
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-Action Phase-(Hero Attacking the Monster)
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-Action Phase-(Monster Attacking Hero)
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-Menu Systems-
-Main Menu Selection-(The Main Menu)(The Text is Animated)
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-Organize-(As of in the game there are more than 20 characters playable)(Currently Under Improvement)
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-Upgrading the Desired Status-(Sieghart's Own System)
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-Effects of Upgrading Specific Status-
(Now you know what Sieghart will learn in Power = 15)
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-NEW-
Equipment System
The Layouts:
There are three layouts that a player could choose from during the game...
The Medieval Style Layout:
(Currently the Default Layout Set up in the start of the game)
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The Classical Style Layout:
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The Magi Style Layout:
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With Equipped ItemsI know its a little messy)
The Medieval Style Layout:
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The Classical Style Layout:
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The Magi Style Layout:
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NEW!!
The Item Scenes:
Arms:
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Defensives:
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Rounins:
(For those who dont know what Rounins are, It is a Stone Item with a Symbols Engraved into it... It Grants the carrier special abilities if and only if they are a Rounin Warrior.)
(Rounin Warriors are People who studied the Cases of Magis)
(More explanation on the game ^^)
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Key Items:
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Healing Items:
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Switching the Commands:
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The other system is Currently UnderDevelopment...

Spoiler: Screenshots::In-Game

-No Screenies Yet in this Section-
I'll Upload Screenies sooner

(Im gonna upload screenshots later)
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Spoiler: Features

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For those who wants to join PM ME okay?
Now i want to tell you about the recruitments Check the Featured Staffs available below
PM me if you want to join the Project.Dont hesitate to ask questions about the game.
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-HanzoKimura(Yup Me)
-Lockheart
-RESERVED FOR SOMEONE CURRENTLY APPLYING-
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-HanzoKimura(Yup Me Again)
-jayjaykirby
-Coyotecraft
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-AVAILABLE-
-AVAILABLE-
-AVAILABLE-
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-AVAILABLE-
-AVAILABLE-
-AVAILABLE-
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-HanzpKimura(Yup Me Again and Again)
-arctrooper48
-AVAILABLE-
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-HanzoKimura(I know a little in scripting )
-AVAILABLE-
-AVAILABLE-
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-MusicOrsenX
-AVAILABLE-
-AVAILABLE-
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-DONT NEED YET-

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Right now, Im Filling up the list of who i owe some resources...


Freebies:[/FONT]
All free to use

Spoiler: Freebies

A Wallpaper:

Spoiler: Wallpaper

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Game Maker's Log:[/FONT]
Monday, April 30,2007 - *Added Screenshots(Equipment System)
Tuesday,May 01,2007 - *Applying some Character Graphics
Friday, May 04,2007 - *Added Screenshots(Item System)
Sunday, May 06,2007 - *Updated Character Profiles (See Character Section)

 

[ablahblah987]

Wow, looks very impressive. Good luck with this man.

 

[shadowfox]

sounds nice, story a little cliche.
the story itself is somewhat too deep and you've given quite a bit of info away 'bout the game itself.

But I still like the idea/concept behind this game.
Good luck.

 

[coyotecraft]

Just wondering, but were you inspired any by the game Chaos legion?
the names Seila, Yzarc, Sieghart, Azrael, and Chaos children just remind me of it. I think Chaos Legion was based of the first of seven Japanese novels too...

Edit: ok, and the sprite of Sieg...I'm blind

 

[Doctor]

Well, you sure know how to make an attractive project topic. As for the game, I'll have to play it first before posting any comments.

 

[jimmyly]

Wow when I looked at the Battle system picture it look like it good enough to be a PSP game. I'm keeping my eye on this Project. "BOOKMARKED"

 

[Sieghart]

Just wondering, but were you inspired any by the game Chaos legion?
the names Seila, Yzarc, Sieghart, Azrael, and Chaos children just remind me of it. I think Chaos Legion was based of the first of seven Japanese novels too...

Edit: ok, and the sprite of Sieg...I'm blind

the answer to that is yes,
Infact im inspired to a game that looks like it can be a novel or something...
The Names are not Permanent though its just the starting names but
"IF EVER" i designed the name of EACH character, EACH place...
I will replace them sooner...
Right now ill keep the names from Chaos Legion,
Im thinking for the names of the characters based on their attitude...

Wow when I looked at the Battle system picture it look like it good enough to be a PSP game. I'm keeping my eye on this Project. "BOOKMARKED"

w0w what can i say... PSP game ei?
Sure you guys giving makes me more aware to make this game

]Well, you sure know how to make an attractive project topic. As for the game, I'll have to play it first before posting any comments.

Sure ill be posting a demo after i graduate... it is between March 28-March 29
so maybe this coming April im going to post a demo

To all:
Thanks for the comment Guys
But is there someone who is aware to join me here? i feel lonely:'(

 

[Lockheart]

Hmm, not bad. I would assume you've either been working on a bunch of projects over the years or you know how to pull them off very well if this is your first.

Either way, I'll be keeping my eye on this for sure, was iffy at first but now, I'm rather hooked. I like the small shot of the battle system you have there too. Very well done.

Since your still looking for people to help out, I might consider helping you out with the storyline or anything else that I might be of use, let me know by PM.

 

[Sieghart]

Hmm, not bad. I would assume you've either been working on a bunch of projects over the years or you know how to pull them off very well if this is your first.

Either way, I'll be keeping my eye on this for sure, was iffy at first but now, I'm rather hooked. I like the small shot of the battle system you have there too. Very well done.

Since your still looking for people to help out, I might consider helping you out with the storyline or anything else that I might be of use, let me know by PM.

Yes i made old projects over the years but this is the first project that i posted here... the other projects i made is just an experience right now i cant say that im experienced nor unexperienced... just an rmxp user :lol:

Well what can i say... Im indeed looking for staffs especially the Story Director which could be my partner in this project... So i will give you a Demo Project to this when i release one this coming april... im busy right now...
You know... Graduating Student :p

So are you in to the Staff?
I need you though im not that good at Making Grammars and adding an
exciting story plots :lol:

 

[Lockheart]

Yes i made old projects over the years but this is the first project that i posted here... the other projects i made is just an experience right now i cant say that im experienced nor unexperienced... just an rmxp user :lol:

Well what can i say... Im indeed looking for staffs especially the Story Director which could be my partner in this project... So i will give you a Demo Project to this when i release one this coming april... im busy right now...
You know... Graduating Student :p

So are you in to the Staff?
I need you though im not that good at Making Grammars and adding an
exciting story plots :lol:

Why not? It'll give me something extra to do when I'm unable to work on my own project. Sign me up if you'll have me.

 

[Sieghart]

okay Your Hired
sooner ill send you the file of the demo okie?
thanks in advance

Edit:
Would you like the demo Compressed or an open project?(hope you get what i mean)
so that its easy to upload a Compressed(for its small amount of size) rather than an open(which everyone can steal ideas and consisting a large file)

Im gonna offline ryt now
cause i just arrived home(came from school)
and i have to eat and rest a little
Ill be back after 3 Hrs.
Okie?

Time here is 8:30pm i will be back at 11:00pm i guess xD

Edit:
Now im online xD

Edit:
YAWWWNNN.... No replies so far
Im going to sleep
Signing off... Leave comments and suggestion guys...
Im gonna sleep... hehhehehe I'll check the posts by tommorow
gud nyt guys

 

[Sieghart]

can somebody move this thread to project discussion
because i think i already had the requirements to be able to move...
so any mods online? or should i pm them?

 

[Crystalgate]

You could click on the report button on your own post and leave a message that you want the topic moved.

Anyway, the project looks good, especially the visuals. The way your characters are set up resembles a lot that of the average console RPG, more so than most other projects I've seen here does. It would be interesting to see how they compare to those console RPG characters (I have already seen a number of projects whose writings surpass more than 80% of every console RPG I've played).

I have one question though. Your RPG allows the player to control the main character's stat growth. What I wonder is, will your RPG use the default combat algoritm or will it use a custom one? The reason I ask is because I don't think the default battle algoritm supports a "choose your stat growth" system.

 

[Sieghart]

You could click on the report button on your own post and leave a message that you want the topic moved.

Anyway, the project looks good, especially the visuals. The way your characters are set up resembles a lot that of the average console RPG, more so than most other projects I've seen here does. It would be interesting to see how they compare to those console RPG characters (I have already seen a number of projects whose writings surpass more than 80% of every console RPG I've played).

I have one question though. Your RPG allows the player to control the main character's stat growth. What I wonder is, will your RPG use the default combat algoritm or will it use a custom one? The reason I ask is because I don't think the default battle algoritm supports a "choose your stat growth" system.

first.... i already reported this thread yesterday... and pm Lene to move this thread lately... but no one respond =( maybe they are busy or not online
but i will wait...

second... Average Console RPG... hehehehe you think so?
Well thats very flattening :blush:

third... Though im using the Cybersam's Battle System
and Edit the Script itself to fit the project i cant say it is the default battle algorithm, and the "choose your stat growth" thing is a Script... For example
Sieghart battle out a monster and defeated it... And he gain 1 level in that round He will gain "10 Status point"...which can be use from Calling out the main menu and choosing the Boost up Menu... Their youll find the 4 Basic Status: STR,DEX,AGI and INT You can select what to raise their if ever you have upgrade points... Example that i choose him to be a power Type Sieghart. I Used up all the Status point to STR. so basically his STR will raise up 10points(from STR:10 + 10 >> STR:20) and from that point Sieghart can learn a skill depending on the Status he had... From STR:20 He can learn the skill called "Magnum Crash" But thank you for clearing it if others were wondering about it

and dont worry ill soon post the screenshots...
and adding a short intro demo =)

Thanks for the response though
have a nice day

 

[Kyoru]

Your presentation's good, I'l give you that ^_^. The features in your project are interesting. I'm keeping my eye on this one. The battle sprites are very nicely done. Clean, detailed and cute. Keep it up.

 

[Sieghart]

Your presentation's good, I'l give you that ^_^. The features in your project are interesting. I'm keeping my eye on this one. The battle sprites are very nicely done. Clean, detailed and cute. Keep it up.

Thanks =)
but i think yours cooler than mine
when i look at your project it is neater than mine
cause mine have some glitches but i will fix it sooner...

To all:
Can somebody make the character sprite for Seila?
I really need it badly... Though i can make it myself
but dont have enough time for that because
im busy...

but ill try to make it later if i can
but if someone is willing to help me there
please pm me

Edit:
Maybe i should do it myself lol xD...

 

[Sieghart]

SCREENSHOTS ADDED!!
CHECK THE FIRST PAGE...
Sorry for not updating earlier

Give feedbacks pls.
=)

 

[Sieghart]

ADDED Another Screenshots!!
Check First post
Updated::Menu SYSTEMS

Can somebody give feedback to this please?
give me some opinion wether what should i change in the battle systems
or in the menu system

 

[Calibre]

Everything you have looks nice but your project thread still seems a little empty. I would like to see some in game shoots to see the style and atmosphere you are going with. The battle looks pretty good to me, though the stretched map behind it looks not so good. Some of the imagelinks seem to be broken but that may just be me.

 

[Lockheart]

Looking over the new screens, I have to agree with Calibre on the battle shots. They look good but the stretched backgrounds don't... If I ever get a copy of this I could see about making you some tilebased backgrounds that might fit in better.

However I adore and love the battle system look as well as the menu system. I assume they're custom made for your game (i.e. by you) if not, where did you get the base scripts?

I've been going over the story and so far I can't find anything worth redoing with out ruining it. a few errors that need to be corrected, that I've already pointed out but beyond that I think it's a solid story for now.