Shiroun stuff

[shiroun]

I only have 3 for now, and all are of the same person.

'Cause she's my angel.

My first one, the outline (really) of the girl:

http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/6697/87436981xu1.png[/img]

The finished version with wings:

http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/2489/angel2sethwy0.png[/img]

Different Pose, different hairstyle, different clothes:

http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/6057/sethpicutrebm9.png[/img]

 

[Ratty524]

Well I'm not as bad as all of you think.

... *tries to control himself*

One noticeable problem are your proportions, they are pretty out of whack. In the first two one of the legs look thicker than the other, the eyes are too close together (anatomically speaking, the distance between the eyes are one "eye width" across).

For the first two, what's up with her right arm? I can understand the pose you are going for, but it looks like it wasn't done right. It looks flat to me.

Well... All I can say is at least give yourself credit for trying. At least you are bold enough to post these since I myself am a bit edgy about posting my work in the face of professionals.

 

[shiroun]

Added a new one. And erm.. whered U get that quote from ._.?

At any rate thanks, I posted for ideas and critisicm.