Sechs' art and various collections.

[Sechs]

Hello, I want you guys to rate various graphics and artwork that either I, or other members of my game development team have created.
Please post comments that can help my team and me create better stuff.

NOTE: Please do NOT use any of the works I post here in any game whatsoever.
Theft will not be tolerated.

This is where all character art and concept art will go.

Spoiler: Character Art

http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq294/Serujyu/Fate-Full%20Portraits/Hero.gif[/img]
The Silent Protagonist
This was done by my concept artist.

This is where custom graphics will go.

Spoiler: Graphics

Fog Graphics:
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq29 ... s/Fog2.png[/img]
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq29 ... s/Fog1.png[/img]
Graphics for my picture animations:
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq29 ... cture1.png[/img]
All of these were done by me.

This is where all miscellaneous fanart or other creations go.

Spoiler: Miscellaneous Creations

http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq294/Serujyu/Fate-Full%20Portraits/Serge1.gif[/img]
I drew this while looking at another picture..
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq29 ... ncept1.gif[/img]
I drew this during a lecture in my AP Literature class... v_v
Obviously, it's nothing spectacular.
If you look really close on this picture, you'll see that I drew it on the back of a worksheet.

This list will continue to expand. Thoughts?

 

[Shadow_Strike]

You want us to rate?
Whats the comparison? Like, whats a 5 suppose to mean out of 5?

 

[Sechs]

Well, just tell me wether you like it or not.
Tell us if there is anything we can improve on...

 

[Mascarpone]

top: Designs on the character is kinda boring, anatomy's spotty, hand looks like the foot of a wardrobe.

middle: uh it's fogs. not much to say. what's the weird blobby thing supposed to be used for though..

bottom: If ur in an AP literature class focus on the class, because doodles on the backs of worksheets isn't going to help you improve at all.

Serge has a bit of a monkey face the the profile at the top, the rest are passable but really, what you want to be taking refrence from is some good anatomy books or a life drawing class.

 

[Sechs]

top: Designs on the character is kinda boring, anatomy's spotty, hand looks like the foot of a wardrobe.

middle: uh it's fogs. not much to say. what's the weird blobby thing supposed to be used for though..

bottom: If ur in an AP literature class focus on the class, because doodles on the backs of worksheets isn't going to help you improve at all.

Serge has a bit of a monkey face the the profile at the top, the rest are passable but really, what you want to be taking refrence from is some good anatomy books or a life drawing class.

Thanks, I was thinking to have that one redone.
Oh, don't worry about my Ap Literature class, I have a high A and my teacher got off topic that day.
What do you mean that the Anatomy is "spotty"?

 

[Mascarpone]

its inaccurate.

 

[Sechs]

In what ways is it inaccurate? Is it just the hand??

 

[Shadow_Strike]

In what ways is it inaccurate? Is it just the hand??

Well, seeing how you covered up most of it with a cloak anyways, we can't really tell, however, the neck to face connection and angle is pretty shakey, for one the jawline shouldn't divide itself from the neck in this situation. But most importantly, the hand just doesn't work.

mascarpone, I'm ashamed of you. You could crit so much better.
After all, being vague is almost as fun as doing this other thing.

 

[Sechs]

Thanks for the opinion guys, I'll toss out that design and get a new one in.
I'll tell my concept artist to draw another one.
I am not doing the art for my characters in my project, one of my family members is the concept artist.
I can draw pretty well, not as good as she can.
She and I are both on a team working on this together. :P

 

[Mascarpone]

In what ways is it inaccurate? Is it just the hand??

Well, seeing how you covered up most of it with a cloak anyways, we can't really tell, however, the neck to face connection and angle is pretty shakey, for one the jawline shouldn't divide itself from the neck in this situation. But most importantly, the hand just doesn't work.

mascarpone, I'm ashamed of you. You could crit so much better.
After all, being vague is almost as fun as doing this other thing.

i was tired and slightly bitchy. I'll be better next time. (long day at work hadn't had my nap yet)

 

[Venetia]

It looks like you're suffering from a common amateur ailment: The I'm-Gonna-Draw-It-Before-I-Sketch-It-Itis.

Before you draw something, sketch it out. Making your pencil very faint and light (and easily erased), sketch out a rough, shape-based skeleton. Then, considering the blocking, define the musculature and general shapes of the eyes, mouth, etc. Then, going in with a pen, or pressing harder, draw the actual thing.

Check this out, it will take you through the anatomy blocking process designed for manga drawing, step by step:
http://www.bakaneko.com/howto/figure/an ... index.html

Note though, it's also a good guide for learning musculature. You should definitely consider taking your time to learn to draw things WITHOUT skin before you draw them WITH it. It will help a lot!!!

 

[Despain]

NOTE: Please do NOT use any of the works I post here in any game whatsoever.
Theft will not be tolerated.

what. it's shittily-drawn anime garbage and a few photoshop preset filters. yeah you're high on the list of artists i want to steal from!

 

[Despain]

http://www.bakaneko.com/howto/figure/an ... index.html

yes this tutorial is FANTASTIC!

http://www.bakaneko.com/howto/figure/an ... sheads.jpg[/img]

http://www.bakaneko.com/howto/figure/an ... theads.jpg[/img]

i've always wanted to draw really shitty anime! Thans!

 

[Venetia]

I was referring to the tutorials on shape blocking and musculature.