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Sandfall

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Four years ago, a group of exiles took over Scarabia. Archer Cross, Amelia Cheres, and all their exiled friends took advantage of our generous laws and put themselves in a position of power. Soon enough the rebellion spread, and next thing you know, hundreds of years of tradition had been forgotten- like they were nothing.

They weren't fond of our government. They didn't like the way we ran things. But that shouldn't have mattered. They were exiles- criminals- and they had no say in it, or shouldn't have had any.

So where are we now? Hiding, waiting for our chance to strike back and take what is our birthright. Proper order will be restored.

Characters

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Serren Kraye
I don't know much about him, other than his reputation. He's a skilled gunfighter, and he's very cocky. They say that his lover was executed a year before the rebellion and that Serren's a bit of a lost soul now, searching for a long-lost city to fill some sort of hole in his heart. I don't understand it- his lover was just an exile.

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Barzhad Judhan
Everybody knows all about this ugly brute- and how he was one of Archer Cross's generals in their rebellion. They say that he spends most of his time now doing whatever he wants, including entering the pit fights, the animal from the southlands that he is. He has a fierce loyalty to Archer and this "new world" government. They say that he will play a role in times ahead.

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The Dune Knight
This guy is the most talented and feared bounty hunter in Scarabia. He worked for the noble families during the "true world"- what they now call the "old world". He's famous as an exile hunter, and it was he who brought Serren's lover to the nobles for execution five years ago. Times have gone by and he is no longer in the position that he once held, struggling to work as a mercenary in this new world. Maybe I can help him out...

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Ice
I am called Ice, a nickname I earned not only for the light color of my hair but for the cold stare in my eyes, and I am proud to have noble blood running through my veins. My family was just about destroyed during the rebellion, and I have since taken to leading a group known as "Cold Blood", devoted to restoring the proper order of things. I have heard that the legendary Crystal City will be able to give me more power than I can imagine, and I can certainly imagine a lot. I will stop at nothing to restore Scarabia to the way it was.

Gunplay, Pit Fights, and the Battle System

As I mentioned, Serren likes to use his guns, and throuhout the course of Sandfall, he will have a wide variety of them. There are different types of guns, determined by the type of ammunition that the guns use. For example, there are revolvers that use plain bullets, usually six at a time, or there are pistols that use cartridges that can hold up to thirty. Different guns will have different stats as well, such as how long it takes to load or aim the gun. Serren will have to balance many factors along with his ammunition.

Serren will also find himself fighting in close-combat in the form of Pit Fights (see: short game Prize), which use a unique action-based battle system. He'll have a hard time keeping up with some of these enemies, especially since many Pits disallow the use of firearms.

The game's battle system is currently being scripted by Mr. Mo, one of the more prominent and skilled scripter's on the forums I'm confident that he'll do a great job with what I've given him to work with, and as soon as he's finished and I work with the system in action, I'll share information here.

Screenshots

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Here Serren is pulling a gun on a Pit Slave.

That's it for now. Check back for updates- I have a lot planned. This is just the bare bones of what you can expect. :)
 
Hmm... interesting...

The Crystal City isn't related to the city of the same name from the Orson Scott Card series about Alvin Maker, is it?

I like the writing style, the plot outline, and the described weapons dynamic. Sounds great; looking forward to you picking it back up!
 
The Crystal City isn't related to the city of the same name from the Orson Scott Card series about Alvin Maker, is it?

Never heard of it. But the Crystal City isn't really what it sounds like- there's actually a really neat twist with it.
 
Oh, HERE it is. I was waiting for it.

Scarabia is a kick ass name and I'm glad there's guns in it.

All the characters sounds pretty sweet, noice!
 
Finally another thread worth fuckin reading. You already know I love this Des. I'm glad you went with this game. The best choice by far ;) Remeber finish at all cost. I don't wanna have to go looking for you...
 
Don't really have any particular thing to criticize with Sandfall (you've got it all down). The story sounds really nice and I've always been a sucker for desert-based settings.
 
It's nice to see this back up. I notice that you went with the Ice POV after all. I'm impressed at how accessible it still was. Almost makes me want to rewrite the MotW topic post from Sparrow's perspective.

Well, you know I'm fully behind this. I'll be psyched to keep following this thread.
 
Volrath said:
It's nice to see this back up. I notice that you went with the Ice POV after all. I'm impressed at how accessible it still was. Almost makes me want to rewrite the MotW topic post from Sparrow's perspective.

Yeah, I like it. Shows more of the main villain's personality. Now we know that he's racist and stuff, but badass anyway. :x
 
Despain, this is geat, I like the fact that you're doing it from Ice's point of view, very original.
I really like the atmosphere and you seem to have a very well planned world. while not a lot of info is shown I can definetly sense, by the hints you threw (like mentioning the exiles, and other stuff) that you've got a very good world and story planned
can't wait to see it, and I wish you luck
 
As been mentioned, this writing style indeed is a good one. And not having picked the main character like you did last time gives it a little of new feel. Keeps it all interesting.

But bare bones indeed. Not as if that will matter in the end, but I advise keeping it a little bit of info. It seems to make plenty of people interested, and if you can post up a demo, and possibly a few screenshots, I think this project thread will be as good as done. Less can be more, make your readers want more.
 
There is only one bad thing about this, You won't finish this, the story is great, The sprites amazing, But I bet Five Bucks that you won't Finish this, I will only belived when you actualy Finish this. Other than that great Work Despain!
 
Don't worry about him finishing it. I hooked up electrobes to his brain that shock him whenever he thinks about another project.
 
The Cry of Fallen Angels said:
As been mentioned, this writing style indeed is a good one. And not having picked the main character like you did last time gives it a little of new feel. Keeps it all interesting.

But bare bones indeed. Not as if that will matter in the end, but I advise keeping it a little bit of info. It seems to make plenty of people interested, and if you can post up a demo, and possibly a few screenshots, I think this project thread will be as good as done. Less can be more, make your readers want more.

Right now I don't HAVE much else to show, unless you want more character bios. The entire story's planned out, and I have finished the game's intro. Mr. Mo will have the battle system finished this week, so you can expect more info then.

And Chaos, if you're serious about the five dollar bet, my paypal works with derek.despain@gmail.com.
 
This still sounds as awesome as the last time I read the topic back on .net. I'll be keeping an eye out for this one, it ought to be worth a play through.
 

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