Sample WIP (cucumber)

[Slik13]

I'm new at spriting but I really love it, I need you to critisise me and give me tips so I can become a better spriter (you know what they say "practise makes perfect). So ENJOY!

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This is a WIP of my latest character (fully original using Green Raven's cucumber template) tell me what you think.

 

[Irgna]

I like it. Looks like a character from a Harvest Moon game (though that's what I think about the template in general).