Rtp sized character wip

[freakofnature]

Alright i need some feedback on this character, so test it out and please tell me what you folks think of it so far.. also i've kept it simple.

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/Osmos/FON-C1-Kip.png

 

[Euphony]

Freaky! I love it. ^__^ It's very well done.

As far as imrpovements go, the shoes are little monotone. Perhaps contrast the shades a bit more. Also, the eyeholes on the mask are a little blocky. You could probably round them off nicely by placing a slightly lighter gray at each corner of each eyehole. And lastly, the hair is kind of odd, but in a good way. The part in his hair could be lighter, though. Atm it looks like two separate chunks of hair because the part is so dark.

Overall, it's a great design. You should definitely keep going with it.

 

[freakofnature]

Thanks for the tips man, i will fix these things right now

Edit: all these things have been fixed, woo hoo... but i will leave this character aside for now though, i belive i can come up with something better, so till next post amigos