RTP - Sailer/Trader (PA)

[Malachi]

Main character of my unnamed project.

Spoiler: Character

Spoiler: Concept

Comments and/or criticisms?

 

[rikuken]

I like that character, but the concept art looks horrible sorry.

 

[master k]

i agree with above poster. if you plan to use the concept as a thing in the game, redo it.

 

[Malachi]

Yeah the concept art is just...concept. Not being used at all.

 

[Ratty524]

The sprite could use some shading in areas like the bandana and from under the shirt (where the lower part of the torso is), as they cast shadow. Like everyone here has said, that concept is hideous.

 

[Malachi]

I would like it if you would stop calling it hideous...we've established that. As for the torso it has been shaded...somewhat.

 

[Sonata]

I like It alot Malachi, I'm a big fan of you're style.

 

[Malachi]

Well thanks a lot, Money.
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[Grathea]

Well, the angle of the sword in the second and fourth frames seems a little awkward to me. Just taking a quick look at it, so I haven't looked in detail at the shading. But that's what jumped out at me.

 

[hayato]

Wow, I really like the look of this character set. Very nice and unique. *thumbsup*

 

[Malachi]

Thanks. The guy I'm making this project with doesn't agree with you, though. The design for the character was relatively easy. I based the costume on a character from one of the manga my mate makes. I tried to add a modern spin to it but I think I failed : /

 

[Mascarpone]

Sailor not Sailer.

and i like the sprite. ... ... the drawing its really just unnecessary at this point and it's distracting