[RPG] Theo's melody

[Theodoric]

Hello friends. I'm just a newbie composer. And I tried to be composer since 11 month ago. My teacher clea leshlick always guide me.

here some of my creations:

http://www.mediafire.com/?zwogezxzdne
http://www.mediafire.com/?izutwyxywzn
http://www.mediafire.com/?ejje50ymydy
http://www.mediafire.com/?zmym3mygjf1
http://www.mediafire.com/?j3ymyn1i2zo

I wanna be a composer. And I need more feedback.

 

[Toams]

these are ok, but a bit tame though. They're a tad repeating, and it seems like every sound is on the same level. Try fading sounds in, or at least have some in the background, and others in the foreground, so some sounds become more apparent than others (this usually applies to the lead and other melodies)

if this doesn't work with midi (i wouldnt know ive never made a midi) then try switching to mp3..
what program do you use now?