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[Grathea]

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I think this screen really illustrates some of the things you need to do.
For one, FIX YOUR GRAMMAR. It is painful to play this game. Fix that.
Second, your mapping, no offense, is atrocious. There's a stickied Map Discussion thread somewhere, it's quite helpful.
Finally, story. It's been vaguely covered above, but you don't have one, and it SHOWS.

 

[Twirly]

"we cant do nothing"
So that means you actually can do something or what :crazy:
Anyway after reading the first sentence of your story with the "Legendary Warrior" and the "Monster" I didn't
care anymore because I wanted to read a story not a random text...

 

[PiePlay]

Well if you want to read a story go down to your local library and get out a book to read =P. Anyway sorry if the story is a bit random but since i am not making this game its kinda hard for me to make one up on this game. Anyway, its not as bad as the one that was there before, really bad.

 

[Despain]

this game is a joke. i'm locking this so people don't continue to waste their time.