[RPG] "A Cave, Maybe"

[Phoenix]

Ay.

Looking for critiques on this piece, which I guess would fit in a cave somewhere. I'm using it in my game, Dungeons.

It's my first attempt at composing. Don't kill me.

It's a midi. The percussion should be on channel 10... working on getting FL studio now, but I want to know if the melody sounds good.

http://www.4shared.com/file/222234407/3 ... tCave.html

Hey xieke link here
http://bb.xieke.com/files/A%20Cave%20Maybe.mid

 

[zchin]

Well first of all, it sounds fantastically ominous. I'm glad it's your first song because your going to make an excellent composer. But music for dungeons should be able to loop with an easy transition back to the start, bu nonetheless this is still very good, keep up the good work!

Thank you and have a nice day!