(RMVX) Elemental Warrior (NEW) DEMO
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brettlee25
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King Red Of Pancakes":t0pmn70u said:
I'm sorry about that, won't happen again
Brett
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ok it is 3:30 in the morning where i'm at and i just wantd to tell everybody that i will be coming out with a new demo very soon, with kira and some other major players involved. It will go way futher into the plot, I will post the demo on my first post. you will want to play the whole game again even if you already played the last demo because i changed a bit of stuff and am working on my mapping skills. I hope you all will like it.
Thank you for all your support
Brett
brettlee25
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Ok well here it is my new DEMO for Elemental Warriors. It has story updates, and new systems, like Blacksmithing, and fishing, I only added one more boss battle and did not make the game stop and say gameover you just reach a point where you can go no futher. Kira is now in the game, i dont want to give much away, here is a link and i will update the demo link on the 1st post
http://rapidshare.com/files/126229110/E ... r_Demo.exe
Thank you
Brett
Please leave feedback, and as always tell me if you don't like it, i'll be more than happy to change things to make you happy.
http://rapidshare.com/files/126229110/E ... r_Demo.exe
Thank you
Brett
Please leave feedback, and as always tell me if you don't like it, i'll be more than happy to change things to make you happy.
brettlee25
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Ok guys "and girls" I have suddenly gotten the urge to make a LOTR rpg and Postpone Elemental Warrior Untill I at least have a demo or two out for LOTR, Please help me with this decision, I have made a poll and would appreciate your feedback,
Thank you,
Brett
Thank you,
Brett
ebhz.Ash.4rm
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Exiled":awmzz91v said:
Same.
You shouldn't be rushing towards a demo, games take a hell of a lot of time to make and depending on the order in which you can create it some people get demos faster than others, or some put up a topic when they have worked on it for a long time.
You shouldn't feel put off by the amount of work you have to do but you should also take breaks if you feel the work is getting a bit much.
I suggest against making the LotR RPG because working and completing two games successfully is far from easy. I think you should review the games and see which you want to go with but this game will get far more respect and your own input into it than a LotR fangame can.
In the end it's down to you but I highly suggest against making the LotR fangame.
Crystalgate
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I don't think rushing the demo is a good idea either. Also I can't say I'd be interested in a LotR fangame.
Having played the extended demo, I think you need to pay more attention to the characters and their motives. Brett does give me the feeling he's someone who kinda let others drag him along, but Rika's motive to stay with the party looked more like an excuse. A reason for her to stay with the party that doesn't really connect to her persona isn't very satisfying.
Have you worked out what her feelings are and what she wants? It doesn't look this way in the demo. She could have a hidden motive and the description of her does say that don't show her true emotions, but that should be better hinted at then. This does also apply to the other characters. They aren't really doing a very good job of showing or hinting at that they have their own desires. Not to say that they appear to be emotionless, they don't, but their emotions seem thrown a bit into the background and doesn't appear to be connected to why they are doing what they are doing.
Now, there appeared some sort of crisis near the end of the demo. The rule of thumb is that how much the player care about the crisis is in direct relation to how much the player knows about the object of the crisis. The player is far less likely to care about a town she/he never visited than a town which is bubbling with life and where that player also got to know a few NPCs.
As I said before, I think the characters have a certain charm to them and the story you laid out seem workable, but they need more work.
Having played the extended demo, I think you need to pay more attention to the characters and their motives. Brett does give me the feeling he's someone who kinda let others drag him along, but Rika's motive to stay with the party looked more like an excuse. A reason for her to stay with the party that doesn't really connect to her persona isn't very satisfying.
Have you worked out what her feelings are and what she wants? It doesn't look this way in the demo. She could have a hidden motive and the description of her does say that don't show her true emotions, but that should be better hinted at then. This does also apply to the other characters. They aren't really doing a very good job of showing or hinting at that they have their own desires. Not to say that they appear to be emotionless, they don't, but their emotions seem thrown a bit into the background and doesn't appear to be connected to why they are doing what they are doing.
Now, there appeared some sort of crisis near the end of the demo. The rule of thumb is that how much the player care about the crisis is in direct relation to how much the player knows about the object of the crisis. The player is far less likely to care about a town she/he never visited than a town which is bubbling with life and where that player also got to know a few NPCs.
As I said before, I think the characters have a certain charm to them and the story you laid out seem workable, but they need more work.
brettlee25
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Sorry i havent been on much guys, i got in trouble and lost my computer i'll be back on in about a week so see you then
Brett
Brett
brettlee25
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Well i think i'm going to end this game for now. For the past 2 weeks i have been working on a very large game that is going to be one of a kind. I have read almost every tutorial for every version of rpg maker and learned as much as i could. This new game is just......better than this one. so thank you for everybody who played and commented on my game i appriciate it so much. And hope you all check out my new game coming soon. I can't give out any info except that I have not seen any game on this site or the other 7 that I frequently vist, that looks anything like it and can't wait to release a demo. So once again thank you all.
Brett
Brett
Mustardy85
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Where are all of your screenshots? And your graphics? All I see is just grey boxes with big red Xs inside them... maybe its my internet?
brettlee25
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I guess they got deleted from the website i use to upload them, i saw alot of other pictures on this site look like this to, i'lll try to fix the problem soon
Brett
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