I'm writing a few random poems, stories, atc., and I was just wondering if some of you could tell me what this one means to you personally?
It seems kind of silly to me, and I don't know if it will make sense to others, but I would still like to know what it makes you think of.
Peace!
Cold eyes stare out from a foggy window,
The sky is gray, rain falls placidly from a cloud,
Looming from the shadows ahead, something wicked,
Comes this way a damned figure, embodiment of despair,
Stands at the window, screaming inside, nothing out,
Darkness rises, taken away, screaming ceases,
Comes the day, must go, taken home,
Breathe again, darkness gone, still standing,
Cold eyes closed…
The sky is gray, rain falls placidly from a cloud,
Looming from the shadows ahead, something wicked,
Comes this way a damned figure, embodiment of despair,
Stands at the window, screaming inside, nothing out,
Darkness rises, taken away, screaming ceases,
Comes the day, must go, taken home,
Breathe again, darkness gone, still standing,
Cold eyes closed…
It seems kind of silly to me, and I don't know if it will make sense to others, but I would still like to know what it makes you think of.
Peace!