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Excellent as is. I see style in this one. It may be a tad bit stiff looking. BUT its simplicity appeals to me. Because I focus on little details in my art its always a joy to see simple stuff. :3 and with that being the case I like it so far. Your anatomy is fairly solid as well. but of course I have to say that you should add just a tad bit more details in there. But other than that I love what you're doing. Its not overly complicated but it conveys itself through simplicity.mufffin":3gyu02t4 said:
The second one made me laugh. In a good way. Its good for pixel work but the legs are a tad bit to long.
Perihelion
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The skirt is odd; right now it looks like it's hiked up in the back or something. The perspective isn't right for the camera to be peeking up her skirt, so maybe make it look like a breeze ruffled it instead? Also, the bottom of the hair could use more highlights. Not bad aside from that, though!
Maybe more shadowing would help this pop out more though. But you're doing good so far with what you've got. @makasu: Glad you like it, i dont know why you said beetles but thanks anyway.
Haha yeah to tell you the truth i sometimes got frustrated with paint, especially cleaning the lines and drawing whereas on ps you can just make it in 5 minutes. The only thing that makes me go on my work is to see it done after several hours of working on it. >.< Heres another work done from a request of a friend for his face set.
This is my first sprite work so any advice and comments is appreciated.
another one
Haha yeah to tell you the truth i sometimes got frustrated with paint, especially cleaning the lines and drawing whereas on ps you can just make it in 5 minutes. The only thing that makes me go on my work is to see it done after several hours of working on it. >.< Heres another work done from a request of a friend for his face set.
This is my first sprite work so any advice and comments is appreciated.
another one
Mascarpone
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her boob looks like a bubble. it should really obey the laws of gravity a little more.
the pose bugs me too anatomically but i'll let is slide for now.
the pose bugs me too anatomically but i'll let is slide for now.
@Mascarpone: haha yeah it was too late when i noticed thanks for your comments really appreciated it, heres another version of the girl done with paint.
Its broomhilda the witch let me know what you think.
sketch http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/9121 ... tchre8.png
Its broomhilda the witch let me know what you think.
sketch http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/9121 ... tchre8.png
I like the first one the best.
But the Second one scared the shit out of me. And not because it was a bad drawing or anything, it's actually quite good. It's because of what it is. And I lol'd at the same time
Your last one is pretty good. You need some more shading on the clothing. It looks halfway complete. I think you were intending to finish but you got bored.
Like there should be shadow right on the top part of the skirt. to show the shirt hanging over. and on the edges and lines down the middle of shadyness.. Just like you did the legs. Same thing for the sweater. Just obey the laws of the sun.
The bangs need to be a little bit longer. Unless she's looking up. Which she isn't.
One side of her hair is longer than the other. She's not tilting her head so you need to fill in that miss hair
Other wise. It's almost perfect good job :thumb:
But the Second one scared the shit out of me. And not because it was a bad drawing or anything, it's actually quite good. It's because of what it is. And I lol'd at the same time
Your last one is pretty good. You need some more shading on the clothing. It looks halfway complete. I think you were intending to finish but you got bored.
Like there should be shadow right on the top part of the skirt. to show the shirt hanging over. and on the edges and lines down the middle of shadyness.. Just like you did the legs. Same thing for the sweater. Just obey the laws of the sun.
The bangs need to be a little bit longer. Unless she's looking up. Which she isn't.
One side of her hair is longer than the other. She's not tilting her head so you need to fill in that miss hair
Other wise. It's almost perfect good job :thumb:
