Dead Content [ Project + Demo ] The Rebels : The Revolution Begins . New Info. and Screenshot

[Karim Ghazal]

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Hello and welcome to my new project :

The Rebels : The Revolution Begins ..

many of you will close this project so , i want to say just try the demo and then tell me about the

errors or everything that i should do it in the Full Version .. so let us begin our journey now to the

caves of Orcs .. and castles of Elves and  lands of Humans .. so , let's enter to that world ..

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The story begins in the territory of magic .. And in the world of the imagination, which does not exist originally .. There were far-reaching land extending across the sea and the mountains .. Island but huge continent .. This continent is inhabited by three races are: human beings .. and Elves .. and Orcs , they were all living in peace except the Orcs .. the was cuting and kill many people in the lands . The events in the game happene after seven years from one of strongest  war . The war happened between the Orcs and the Elves .. many of the Elves died in that war , but where is the Humans in that war ? why the Elves fights againts Orcs alone ? because the dark lord Agar the lord of the dark lands controled the king of the Humans land the lord Theodore Buet and he used him againts the Elves ( The Elves were live with the humans in the same land . ) and he used him to refuse to fight with the Elves againts the Orcs .. but the Elves have no choice only the fight to save the the lands from the dark . the war happened , the Elves lose many souls ..  and after the war , the Elves traveled to the South .. and live there alone .. but now .. after 7 years from these years .. the dark is back , and now they should save the lands again .. but the Elves send to Brilthor ( the capital of Humans lands ) them messenger to save Theodore from Agar's hands .. and then the king is back , but after what ? he is in shame now , many of his people died in the battle , the he make his people a slaves .. the story long .. this just a main story .. now let's see the characters in the game .

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There is many Characters in the game .. so , here is tha main of them :

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Name : Victor Hamilton .

Age : 29 .

Description : He is the boss of The Rebels in all the lands .. very strong , courage man , judicious

man too .. his best friend is Rowland Vasser .. his main place is Amarth . is Rowland Vasser .. his

main place is Amarth .

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Name : Rowland Vasser .

Age : 24 .

Description : One of the strongest rebels in the lands .. his father Vasser was very brave , he is

Jimmie's brother .
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Name : Jimmie Vasser .

Age : 19 .

Description : He is Rowland's brother .. he is the main character in the game .. funny and good

character .. his lvl is 1 he joined the rebels in the begin of the game . and Rafael his best friend .
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Name : Rafael Arthur .

Age : 19 .

Description : The best froend of Jimmie .. he is level 2 , he is always make joks in Jimmie .. they are

together all the time .
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Name : Theodore Buet .

Age : 53 .

Description : The king of the Humans lands .. he was cursed on Agar's hands .. but he is back

again .. many surprise  waiting this king , check them by your self  ^_^ .

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Name : Adolphus Plater .

Age : 38 .

Description : The general of Brilthor army .

- Many other rebels and characters in the game .. -

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First i want to show you some of the Screenshots of the game :

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Now to the download :

First : Download the RTP of the game from :

http://tkool.jp/rtp/vx_rtp102e.zip

Second : Download the Pro. from :

http://www.tkool.jp/products/rpgvx/data ... rial_v.exe

Third : Now the game .. you can download it form :

http://www.zshare.net/download/86213129b6dfd6

Eazy web-site ..  :lol:

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Note : Finish to here .. maybe the description of the project is not good

something like that .. i am not good in English .. there is  much more description you can find it in

the game , visit the topic any time to check the update and more info.

My best wishes .. i will wait the posts .. K.G.

WAIT FOR THE FULL - VERSION

 

[JakeyZombie]

You should have someone help you out with your writing, seeing as how you seem to have a bit of trouble with english.

EDIT: Oh, and you don't actually need VX to play the games people put out for it, you just need to make sure you have the RTP installed. I managed to play through the demo, aside from your english, it wasn't too shabby, I guess. Very standard, though.

 

[Diedrupo]

I want to download this, but zshare is a terrible file host. I clicked on the link and got endless popups and advertisements. Can you rehost it on rapidshare or box.net?

 

[Karim Ghazal]

You should have someone help you out with your writing, seeing as how you seem to have a bit of trouble with english.

EDIT: Oh, and you don't actually need VX to play the games people put out for it, you just need to make sure you have the RTP installed. I managed to play through the demo, aside from your english, it wasn't too shabby, I guess. Very standard, though.

Aha .. i know it now about the RTP .. well , i am bad in English . but you can read and understand it ^^ .. TNX for supporting ..

I want to download this, but zshare is a terrible file host. I clicked on the link and got endless popups and advertisements. Can you rehost it on rapidshare or box.net?

Okay my friend .. download the game from another web - site :

Mediafire :

http://www.mediafire.com/?sxzwjzighcm

waitig for posts ..

 

[Hevendor]

The point is, the game actually looks decent, unlike many other projects here, and it would be a shame to let it be ruined by bad english. Post at the recruitment forums, I'm sure you'll find someone to help.

 

[Karim Ghazal]

The point is, the game actually looks decent, unlike many other projects here, and it would be a shame to let it be ruined by bad english. Post at the recruitment forums, I'm sure you'll find someone to help.

Okay , if it's not the good place for the project i will wait for changing the place .. and , i will fix the english in the next time ^^ ..

 

[Mazoku]

he is always make joks in Jimmie .. ]

...is that legal?

Your mapping is decent. Your english... is not. You should work with a translator to help make the script more understandable. I'd be very interested in this game if I could understand it.

 

[rikuken]

Here's a translator http://babelfish.altavista.com/

 

[Grathea]

It sounds interesting, I guess.
But why are the words 'orcs', 'elves' and 'humans' always in red? It really distracts me.

Here's a translator http://babelfish.altavista.com/

I'd advise you against using this for long phrases. For a single word it's alright, but it screws up sentences to almost beyond recognition. Also, it doesn't give context, and only one meaning of the word when sometimes that's not the best one to use.
Instead, I'd do a Google search for an online English-[whatever your first language is] translating dictionary. Those are often better.

 

[Karim Ghazal]

he is always make joks in Jimmie .. ]

...is that legal?

Your mapping is decent. Your english... is not. You should work with a translator to help make the script more understandable. I'd be very interested in this game if I could understand it.

sorry for this my friend ..

Here's a translator http://babelfish.altavista.com/

Tnx alot for the link .. but i use a program to translate .. but the same , bad in bad ..

It sounds interesting, I guess.
But why are the words 'orcs', 'elves' and 'humans' always in red? It really distracts me.

Here's a translator http://babelfish.altavista.com/

I'd advise you against using this for long phrases. For a single word it's alright, but it screws up sentences to almost beyond recognition. Also, it doesn't give context, and only one meaning of the word when sometimes that's not the best one to use.
Instead, I'd do a Google search for an online English-[whatever your first language is] translating dictionary. Those are often better.

I used the red for any name or nation .. and i always use Google to translate and two programs to translate .. but it doesn't help , they are all bad .. like me .

 

[BlackWings]

Sounds like a decent game, this is the first VX game i'm willing to try & maybe i'll help you with translating after i try the game.

The Mapping looks good & the story is ok.

Last but not least good luck with the game & more to come after trying the demo.

 

[Karim Ghazal]

Sounds like a decent game, this is the first VX game i'm willing to try & maybe i'll help you with translating after i try the game.

The Mapping looks good & the story is ok.

Last but not least good luck with the game & more to come after trying the demo.

Thanks for support .. i just want to share my game .. i know the english in game is bad even the dialoge .. but forgive me ..  i will fix this one ..

 

[Karim Ghazal]

Hello every one ! now , i am workig on the Version 2.0 of my game .. so, i want to share

with you guys the last Screenshots and Info. of the second version of the game ..

New Screenshots !

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" These are from Brilthor Castle .. that's you will see it in the next version of the game .. "

And now many screenshots from Brilthor Village .. :

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And this is the world map of the game :

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New Event's !

here .. i will show you the new scripts that i will use them for the Version 2.0 of the game .. and

other events from the story , scripts , events .. ETC. :

First , i will change the Window-Skin and the font and the specially the dialouge of the game :

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Second , i will use the visible monsters , i mean you can can see the monsters on the map , if you

touched any one , that's mean you will fight him , look at the picture :

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Third , there will be a Two - Player Engine in the game , that's mean .. the game will change to multiplay game :

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Fourth , new event's like Traps , Shooter Maina .. and jumps :

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... Wait for the Version 2.0 to check them all .. sorry for my bad English ..


Commnets ?  :thumb:  Fell free !

 

[JD_Slasha]

Alright, not counting your latest post, you've double posted multiple times. I've merged these all for you, but it would do you good to read up on the forum rules. Don't bump unless it's either 72 hours, or like your latest post, you have something new to update. Consider this a warning.

-JD

 

[Karim Ghazal]

Okay , sorry for this .. but this a update for the game .. tnx for suporrt .

 

[BlackWings]

-  After finishing the demo [can't believe i did], sorry to tell you that it took me this long to finish it; while it was short the dialogue is just a pain.

-  Your game has potential, although you could use the "shock" sound effect a little less, i laughed everytime i heard that.

-  Don't take this the wrong way i'm just trying to be helpful & you take this as an oppurtunity to better your english. & in the next demo try to include a few battles; i wanna see how you want your battle system to be.

I wish you the best of luck & hope to see this game become better & better as you learn a new thing everyday.

 

[Karim Ghazal]

-  After finishing the demo [can't believe i did], sorry to tell you that it took me this long to finish it; while it was short the dialogue is just a pain.

-  Your game has potential, although you could use the "shock" sound effect a little less, i laughed everytime i heard that.

-  Don't take this the wrong way i'm just trying to be helpful & you take this as an oppurtunity to better your english. & in the next demo try to include a few battles; i wanna see how you want your battle system to be.

I wish you the best of luck & hope to see this game become better & better as you learn a new thing everyday.

Thank you my friend .. your points are all right and good for me .. i will fix everything that you told me to change it .. i know that the game has a problems and mistakes .. sorry about that ..

 

[Karim Ghazal]

BUMP !! Waiting for comments ..