Poptart's WorkShop

[siarra73]

I'll be tyrying to improve the labels alot they look unorganized to me.. I'll probably redo them. For the impact version I'll finnish making the whole room number character set like that, in impact without bold

 

[$t3v0]

Siarra .. The signs are the kind of thing that people would just do themselves if needed. If you want people to use your signs over their own/others, I'd suggest making them more appealing, visually.

For a start make each sign suit what it's portraying. Why is every sign yellow? Why does every sign have the same font? How many signs do you see around you that have the same font with the same background on it? Hardly any!

My suggestion would be to add dumbells next to the gym sign, A book next to the school you know, that sort of thing.

 

[siarra73]

I Just added a character set. Its the modern teen. She is my first character I did completley myself. The others are just edits/recolors/frankensprites. I had a hard time making hair until I looked at Ven's HK hair tutorial. I think it helped improve my hair making skill alot.

 

[siarra73]

I added another modern teen.. But a boy this time.




Sorry to double post but I'm posting my updates.

Nphyx: You're welcome to double post IF you are adding new stuff.

 

[Neverplayd]

When your grappler and gunner kiss, they aren't moving their legs, so it looks like they are sliding into each other. Good work on the modern teens though.

 

[Venetia]

Your work is coming along, but it looks like you kinda stopped at about 1/3rd the way through my hair tutorial. You're using (what looks like) only 3 colors, and while you blocked out the "halo", there was no shading or outline reduction done.

Keep trying! You'll get it :D

 

[siarra73]

Thanks for the tips. I'll try to redo the kissing then. Also, I'll read in more depth on your tutorial now that I have a bucket full of time. XD

 

[rikuken]

Shade the icons more that's all.

 

[siarra73]

When your grappler and gunner kiss, they aren't moving their legs, so it looks like they are sliding into each other. Good work on the modern teens though.

I updated the kissing characterset.

 

[siarra73]

I just added a fairy and little boy XD

 

[AbyssalLord]

Nice sprites, I could definitely use some of these.  There's just one thing, the Modern Male Blonde Teen has this little spike-like thing on the front of his hair...it may just be me, but it looks a little awkward.

Also, where are these unshaded icons that everyone's talking about?

 

[siarra73]

I plan to completly redo the blonde male teen. Also, the icons I got rid of. XD

 

[AbyssalLord]

I see.  Well, keep up the good work!

 

[siarra73]

I updated the modern male teen

 

[siarra73]

I added another modern teen XD

 

[AbyssalLord]

Excellent work!  Maybe try working on some adults?