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Torai

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Nightessence.jpg

I made this from scratch using Paint and GIMP. It's not being made for a game. I just did it because I had some free time. Please give constructive criticism.
 
looks prty cool, only thing I would do is , well nvrmind im seein stars now lol but adding something to the green would be nice, how do you create that water color looking effect, with the moon and comet, its sweet
 

Jason

Awesome Bro

Hmm I think the background could do with being darker, and lol at MC, that, to me (And dsoulja85) looks like a comet flying by the moon, pretty cool if I might say so.
 

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