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[Lkmb98]

Somebody please close this.....

 

[Magicant]

Well let’s just start by saying I think the name of this game is extremely retarded. The story content is beyond lacking. The character bios also lacking. A name and two or three traits describing their entire personality is kinda weak imo, I mean, all of their past seems to be summed up in about 10 words or less. I know you’re using RMVX, but the mapping is also nothing to be in awe about. In fact, there isn’t really much about it that I do like. It also confuses me why you would have a retarded game name like this, and have lighthearted characters, I mean seriously, it just seems REALLY out of place.

 

[seven]

Well let’s just start by saying I think the name of this game is extremely retarded. The story content is beyond lacking. The character bios also lacking. A name and two or three traits describing their entire personality is kinda weak imo, I mean, all of their past seems to be summed up in about 10 words or less. I know you’re using RMVX, but the mapping is also nothing to be in awe about. In fact, there isn’t really much about it that I do like. It also confuses me why you would have a retarded game name like this, and have lighthearted characters, I mean seriously, it just seems REALLY out of place.

Seconded. I have been given no actual idea of the plot, and I'm being drawn in with fake content to download a demo that is, from what information I have been given, not worth my time. >:l

 

[Grathea]

Speaking of which, the demo link doesn't work.
Fix up your post according to the rules with the required info and demo, and this won't be locked.
You've got 24 hours.

 

[kaze950]

Those faces aren't recolored very well.

And you know you can take screenshots without Hypercam, right? PrtScrn is on your keyboard for a reason.

Don't have things like "OMG Rly" in your plot description. Think of your plot description as the back of a video game box.

But, gratheo, I didn't think a demo was required for a topic. The rules only mentioned having at least two screenshots.

 

[seven]

But, gratheo, I didn't think a demo was required for a topic.

It isn't, unless it's in the Completed Games And Demos subforum.

 

[moog]

Is this a fucking joke? Im sorry, but the plot, screens and dialog all look like crap. You type like a 3 year old and your mapping is god awful. Dont take this a flaming, but jesus this looks bad. Go back and try again, thats all I can say.

 

[hima]

The name Kizuki Itsoumi stop me from downloading this game. Please, don't use random Japanese name.

Also, the characters are COVERED by the message box in almost all of your screenshots. I don't think that's a good idea.

 

[seven]

The name Kizuki Itsoumi stop me from downloading this game. Please, don't use random Japanese name.

Also, the characters are COVERED by the message box in almost all of your screenshots. I don't think that's a good idea.

The namesKizuki Itsoumi and George both in the same game? The styles kinda clash, dontcha think? Also, why are you editing your post in response to feedback instead of posting? It's annoying!

 

[Despain]

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[Lkmb98]

Also, why are you editing your post in response to feedback instead of posting? It's annoying!
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Is this better?
I just don't like bumping my own thread......