Pizza Guy, Modern, WIP, RTP-Style

[Sapphire]

I came up with this Sprite today. He is a Pizza Guy.
I kinda like him.
But feel fre to tell your opinions on him!

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/2860 ... hotsv3.png[/img]


I don't know, wheter I finish him or not, but since he's RTP, it wouldn't be too much work.

Please tell me, how to improve!

 

[Siege]

Haha, that's actually pretty cool, add a hat with a slice of pizza on it too.

 

[Rain]

yeah were is his pizza? lol

Also the shading on his jeans needs a little work

 

[Tim.]

Damn, those are some baggy pants. Pretty big, dont you think?

Edit: Also your contrast on the pants is a little to much, mainly those bright white lines. Also, the shirt looks odd sloping down that much.

 

[Sapphire]

Damn, those are some baggy pants. Pretty big, dont you think?

Look at some kids on the streets, it's the sad truth... :please:

But I need to work a bit on the pants, I think... but I don't really know, what to do about them...
I made the sprite for another user and he said "he shall have baggy pants!" :thumb:

 

[Hybrid]

Oh Sapphire, I like this guy.

You're right, many kids on the
streets look like that ~.~
They didn't look very well, but
your Char does ^-^

~Bye Hybrid

 

[Rpgbrummi]

Die Falten sind noch nich perfekt!
<translated through google:>
"The folds are still not perfect!"

(i´m sry didnt now howto say that in engl, but saph is german )
Google, Babel, FreeTranslation, there are various websites which provide some form of translation, albeit not always perfect. -Tana

 

[RG-X.zeroStar]

Yeah Sapphire your char is realy nice.

Why you don´t post this char in the german
forum? I think the people there say the same
as here : It is nice.

Also post it in a german forum like Link Removed

Nice Work, go on with this char :D

greez zeroStar