P.Yoshi's [New] Art

[Professor Yoshi]

Tcofa's avatar:
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c165/ ... /bypy2.png[/IMG]

For awhile, nothing happened. But I felt like redoing that picture with Tcofa's quote in mind for some time.
After a bit of pondering, and a little patience, here's what I came up with.

Spoiler: Love reign o'er me.

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y207/Professor2501/washaway3.jpg[/IMG]

I can spot a few problems offhand, be sure to send your advice so I may better myself.

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Spoiler: Older

Spoiler: For $t3v0's Christmas Thread

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y207/Professor2501/Black%20Hat%20Concept%20Art/winterblues14copy.jpg[/IMG]

Spoiler: Older Misc.

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y207/Professor2501/MIsecond2.jpg[/IMG]http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y207/Professor2501/mi1vanish.png[/IMG]

 

[kip]

she so cute how did you make the rain effect

 

[alexia]

I like the style. It reminds me of some of Ana Juan's work.

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r228 ... juanex.png[/IMG]

Well, sort of. On your newer one, is she winking? It seems a little off. Maybe it's because of the shape of her opened eye.

 

[The Cry of Fallen Angels]

=)

I like it, a few flaws maybe, but still cute. A little more shadow, the vague tears, and accenting the eyelid might make it better, maybe eyebrows would work, her forehead is a bit empty without. I love the background, gives the "lonely-in-the-big-city-kinda-feeling"

 

[Professor Yoshi]

A little more shadow, the vague tears, and accenting the eyelid might make it better, maybe eyebrows would work, her forehead is a bit empty without.

Very true, I definitely need some work in that department. I usually don't
draw eyebrows because they come off as awkward. It's something I'll work on.

On your newer one, is she winking? It seems a little off. Maybe it's because of the shape of her opened eye.

Yeah, it is off, she's supposed to be closing her eye from the rain. I'm not
too good at drawing eyes, so it looks a little funny.

she so cute how did you make the rain effect

A number of PSE filters, I could tell you the full list if you're really interested.

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I appreciate the comments, they're most delightful.

 

[kip]

i would be glad to hear about them. and its beacuse of you that i use art rage now and that i bought myself a tablet pc

 

[Professor Yoshi]

I was messing around with the basic structure of the face, but it turned out quite poorly.
It's apparent I need more work on the subject, and most certainly a new style of eyes.

Spoiler: Restructuring

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y207/Professor2501/comparison.png[/IMG]
I evened up the edges of her hair, making it more round. I lowered the hair to match her forehead, I changed the hue on her face to make the rain more visible.
I also tweaked the roundness of the head, but ended up making that quite worse. I think I over-shadowed it too. Those eyes, they're quite incorrect.

Spoiler: Full

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y207/Professor2501/rain2revision.jpg[/IMG]

To Kip
I'm not certain the exact differences between PS:Elements 2, and the version you're using. I'm sure they have similiar filters,
if not you should be able to find a substitute.

But the way I perform it is:
Make a new layer > Fill it with 50% opacity white > Use "Pointillize" filter >
Press ctrl+shift+u (gets rid of color) > Use "Motion Blur" Filter in the direction you want.
>Fiddle with the opactiy until you find it acceptable.

 

[The Cry of Fallen Angels]

Looks better =)

 

[Neopilos]

Much better. In fact, if you put eyebrows on your new one (even if they are faint), that would make it sweet.

Good job.