Osmos template-wip

[freakofnature]

Hey folks, i'm starting work on another template, tell me what you think of this frontal view.

Osmos template
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http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/Osmos/Fon-osmos-temp.png

And here it is with a small fix, legs where a tad too short on the first.
I also made a different shaped head, i like 'em both but i'd like it if you folks
tell me witch you like better.
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/Osmos/fon-legfixfrontal.png

EDIT:
I now see it's looking a bit like Showkaizers template but not too much i think, so i will finish it and move on to the female and kid, and then maybe create another some time after that.

I'm kind of tired of the anime style eyes so i have switch 'em to a style of eyes i prefer.
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/Osmos/Eyes.png

 

[Mac]

Very nice, i'm really liking it.

You seem to bring out the best templates i must say!

 

[Rye]

Aw, I think it looks really nice and adorable. It would be cool to see it finished.

 

[freakofnature]

Thanks for the comments guys, for a while i thought no one liked it , i now plan to finish it and i have already completed the frontal frames as well as made the side and back standing frames, and all created at a quicker pace thanks to my work on the alternate man, i've applied most of what i learned there to this one.

 

[Despain v.1]

I like it. Bring in the ears my one pixel, though.

 

[Showkaizer]

That's hot man. It would look awesome with the tileset you made!! keep it up! =)

 

[Darc]

the first link is broke

looks good. keep up the good work.

 

[Kiniko]

I love this template. Keep it up.

 

[freakofnature]

Appreciate the comments guys, this makes me want to work harder now XD, i will post again when i have more, i have the standing side view and it's looking good but there's somethnig that is bothering me about it, i will post it later on today.

Despain: I will see about that today soon as i get back to the temp thanks
Showkaizer: Hey yeah this would go well with that chipset of mine, thanks.
Edit: And it will go well with the rtp as well, though some things like doors will need a resize.

 

[freakofnature]

Hello again folks, this is what i have going so far, i was going to upload it earlier today but i noticed something.. and then noticed some other things i could improve on, i'm sure there are some other areas i can work on but i'm kind of tired now so if you guys see anything i can change for the better let me know and i will try my best to.

First here's a picture of the temp with rtp.
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/Osmos/Fon-osmos-W-rtp.png

And the incomplete character sheet.
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/Osmos/Fon-Osmos-M-wip.png

The animation for back frames will be easy to make, but the side animation is what will kill lol.
Edit: btw i fixed that small prob i had with the side view but yeah let me know if you guys see anything else.

 

[Kiniko]

The legs that are forward in the 2nd and 4th frames of the down facing pose look a tad odd to me... The bottom of them has a lot of eather the darkest shade or the outline colour... I can't tell..... I hope I explained that ok.

 

[Showkaizer]

Actually that same mechanic is used in RTP sprites. The leg forward is supposed to subconciouslty give you the illusion of a distorted overhead view. The only reason you notice it now is becuse it isn't shaded. You'll find the same thing done on Chrono Trigger and FF sprites from SNES.

@ FON

The face seems mushed in on the side view. And as stated before, I think you should shade that back leg to make it less obvious.

 

[freakofnature]

Thanks for the help guys, Showkaizer I will work on the side view for the face and see what i can do, now on the leg shading you guys are talking about the frontal correct? So i should go with an even darker shade/color there then?
either way i have to add more shading for the side view hind leg as well, please get back to me soon and let me know.

Edit: I have edited the face for the side view, looks alot better what do you guys think?
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/Osmos/Face.png[/IMG]

Edit: Here we go, tell me what you think.
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/O ... /-Step.png[/IMG]http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/Osmos/darkercolor.png[/IMG]