Oola - W.I.P

[Hutton]

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I started drawing Oola from Star Wars. I have no real purpose in drawing her, she's not for a game or anything, I just enjoy making resources for people. Can you please rate it and all that heehee.

~Hutton~

 

[sixtyandaquarter]

Something that people do that have a habit of quirking me, is not shading meshes/straps/nets/etc. when on the body. You have all that dark pixelated mess. I'm not saying what I do is great, but try to shade, somewhat, when you can. I only see 3 colors, and 2 of them are the belt.

I don't know Oola, but after a google image search I see you did a very nice job on the additional forms (tendril thingies?). Good work on that. The only thing I'd suggest is you have a very light spot, right next to the ears on the tendril thingie. You might want to add the next darker color, just a pixel or two, to break it up, make it appear as if the head cast shadows on it - know what I mean?

Good job though. Keep it up.

EDIT: Oh, and fix that MSPaint mistake :p
Between the legs (of all sprites, including the one you're showing off) you have a spatch of colors from another background in there. You might want to turn that to match the rest of your background.

 

[Hutton]

That mistake has already been fixed. And how can you not know Oola? You seriously need to watch Star Wars!

~Hutton~