One new song and another one in progress!(MP3)

[Celvin]

Some c&c on both the songs is much welcome!

Strain
I wanted to create a fast paced battle song for my rmxp project, this is the result. It's both busy and quite hectic, but that was my intention as well.
Heh, I think I got a bit too creative from the mid-song and out, as it got a lot more pop/skate punk feeling to it than I originally had in mind.

http://www.home.no/celvin/strain_demo.mp3

Rock It(a song in progress)
Pretty generic rock, I like it so far. I'm not quite sure how I'll progress from this point on, though...

http://www.home.no/celvin/rockit_version2_2.mp3

I made both songs using Guitar Pro 5.

 

[Mr. Thunderpussy]

Strain

It's pretty cool, a bit generic, and I think that I'd enjoy listening to it while I battled. Problem 1: If it is a battle theme, then it needs to be loopable, because the song isn't long, and sits as if the battle won't be last too long.
Problem 2 (Though this is more personal preference): I reckon you should really make the drum-beat more bassier, more heavier, so that it can actually be heard over the battle sounds. Apart from that, good job!

Rock it

This I can see as an awesome intro theme. I don't have any qualms with it, apart from the abrupt ending.

You should head over to www.newgrounds.com and check out the audio portal. The songs over there could give you inspiration. :thumb: Top effort!

 

[Celvin]

Thanks sys!

Hm, you got a point there. I guess I could make the drum-beat a bit more defined. I'll look into making it loopable as well. Currently Guitar Pro has the habit of cutting songs a bit too roughly towards the end when recording.