Omega Force Hybrida [NSFW]

[Hybrida]

How original.

This will be a hilarious joke game. Seriously, great parody of everything someone could do wrong with a game and story idea!

Believe it or not, yes the game will be funny most of the time. As in everything wrong, I don't know what you mean. Don't explain. So far 75% of people loves the story. I know many people will look down at it, but just 25% negative I get. Even at 100% negative, I will still make this game. Even if GOD says it suck, I will still complete this game.

I have a very strange mind, but I know what I'm doing. Trust me

 

[Sailor Taurus]

Completely ignoring the adult rating (i'm not here to judge, I personally would actually like to see MORE mature games here), I must say that the artwork is horrible to look at and the concept itself is laughable. Just because you're doing an adult game doesn't mean you should throw quality out of the window, tits aren't going to compensate for a poor game no matter how big and bouncy you make 'em.

First of all, stop with all this "pixellated black outline" shit. It's obvious you're using a program that does soft colours and brushes, use them for the lineart! It just looks horrible when you mix pixelart with the smudge tool, especially if you don't know how to shade them (your light sources are all over the place). You also REALLY need to brush up on your art style in general; anatomy, faces, clothes, character design...it would sort of help if you dressed them in something a little more interesting then different coloured tanktops. And of course you can't draw decent erotica if you can't even draw the human body, that means being able to do more than draw a couple of misshapen circles onto a thin rectangle. You also need to learn how to draw men, your men look like anorexic women.

You say this game will have a lot of humor. Well honey if you don't improve that art, people are gonna be laughing for entirely different reasons.

BTW, 65% of statistics are fake.

 

[mawk]

So far 75% of people loves the story.

absolutely

 

[para.Dox]

I honestly enjoy how you've slapped the copyright label on everything. Must make you feel pretty damn important, eh? Well, I've got a few little facts for you.

You didn't write a book that's 6481 pages long, stop with your pseudo-intellectual babble. And if you did, it's absolutely non-sensical bullshit. Like this project.

The idea of Energy-Storing-Death-Star-Tits is special. In a hurr durr derp derp way.

And I personally think it's nasty that you get off to the idea of people roleplaying you getting raped by 2D aliens, but everyone drinks from their own cup of tea.

Overall, I give this project 5 whopping facepalms out of 5.

 

[Hybrida]

I honestly enjoy how you've slapped the copyright label on everything. Must make you feel pretty damn important, eh? Well, I've got a few little facts for you.

You didn't write a book that's 6481 pages long, stop with your pseudo-intellectual babble. And if you did, it's absolutely non-sensical bullshit. Like this project.

The idea of Energy-Storing-Death-Star-Tits is special. In a hurr durr derp derp way.

And I personally think it's nasty that you get off to the idea of people roleplaying you getting raped by 2D aliens, but everyone drinks from their own cup of tea.

Overall, I give this project 5 whopping facepalms out of 5.

Say whatever you want dude. I paid for my copyright for my story. By law I had to put the copyright symbol. I started on my story in 1999. If You dumbass people wanna focus on the mini game, so be it. It was cut out, then I put it back. I have very very large book filled with data on my story. Everything you see is from 100% me.
I'm fully prepared to take all the negative bullshit you people throw at me. Keep the negative shit coming. As you can see I really don't care. I will review the comments, then reject them. If you're gonna be negative, say something nice first. All 100% negative comments will be completely ignored. I fight fire with nukes. Have a nice day sir.

 

[Dalton]

Honestly... Either you are trolling like hell, or you are one of the worst members ever.

I wont go on about your "mature" content. People tried to tell you, but you are just ignoring them so I don't see the point.

Anyways what really seems to be a bad idea to me is the simple fact, that you seem to believe your characters become cool by just giving them some extreme power.
Let me tell you, that is not what makes a character interesting.
What makes characters interesting is their personality. People enjoy characters that are displayed in a way that you'd think they could be real living human beings. They need character traits, both good and bad ones. They need weaknesses. They need to react to people around them in a way that is showing me excactly those traits.
What is even more important: They need a reason they have those traits. Thats what we call background when talking about characters.

I will not care the least for a character that is just immensely powerfull (I mean honestly what is the sense in fighting when you can destroy the universe?!?) and has a pair of gigantic boobs. Thats just plain boring.

On another note: You presented your game to the public. We are members of a forum, that is dedicated to Homebrew games. It is the idea of this forum to help each other out while making such games.
It is only logical that people come here and tell you what they don't like about your game. They do so because they think you could do better. Telling them that you will ignore them is not the smartest move.
Also by presenting your in progress game here you are automatically putting it into comparison to other in progress games. Meaning you have to go up against stuff like "MoW" Or "Quintessence".
While we surely do not expect you to make games such as those (after all they are extremely popular) we can't help but think that your game looks rather bad.

And as a closure to my 2 cents: You want people to tell you nice things first before saying what is wrong. But I don't see ANYTHING good about this. And that is bad, since I normally tell people what I like at first.

Please think about this

~Dalton~

 

[mawk]

If you're gonna be negative, say something nice first.

this is a good policy A+

assorted gentlemen this thread keeps getting worse and I don't think chained facepalm images and restating points that the OP's content to ignore is gonna fix things

 

[ellenor]

Okay, I am going to try to comment this a little

First the good points
- You trying to create custom graphic
The bad thing with it though is that they clash with the rtp...
The same goes for the character artwork
it is good that you trying to make your own art but I can see that you lack
knowledge in anatomy.

The story is okay but as some people already have pointed out it is strange
that some of these girls even fight when they can destroy the universe.
My advice would be try to make them weaker
They can still be stronger than ordinary humans though.
Well that's all from me

Good luck with your project!

 

[MCsephiroth13]

I'm going to be Mr. Positive right now!

I think this game looks and is very, very creative and it's very action-packed with super mega ultra powers that don't make any sense but are still cool like in Dragonball Z. The girls' boobs are massive, that's a plus. I watched one of the battle test videos and I LOVE the animations especially that meteorite thing that creates the crater and how it shows a short video thing before it deals damage. Very well thought-out and nicely done .

 

[Hybrida]

@ Ellenor & MCsephiroth13. Thankyou both. Your comments are very helpful. Battle back damage is happen after really big attacks. You also get to destroy planets on the game too. I'm working on level select screen, It will be a map of the galaxy. When you beat a level you are given the option to destroy the planet/level.

I think this game looks and is very, very creative and it's very action-packed with super mega ultra powers that don't make any sense but are still cool like in Dragonball Z.

LOL I know. Their power comes from Star Crystals. These crystal comes from Supernova. A Supernova can destroy a Star system. So my hybrids are really powerful.

About the animations, I have over 700 now. I'm going for 1400. My move list is really long. On my game you learn a new move every level!

 

[Velocir_X]

Understand this Hybrida, I'm not attacking your game, I'm not defending it...
Look at MY standpoint for a second.
Your game has inherrent flaws, this has been established by a large majority,
your current graphics are rubbery and anotomically inacurate
they don't mesh with your rtp
your characters fall into Archetypes
This has been established, don't deny it, and I'm definatley not making it up...
Furthermore your game has apparent similarties with DBZ:
Epic battles
Big Explosions
A super mode above the regular with physical changes
Relative lack of motives for fighting
though this isn't neceserilly a mad thing, I personally always like DBZ games (hated the show though)
The battles might be even more epic since it ain't dudes
Also your animations are nice - Particle effects

So all in all your game has flaws (no duh)
yet it is worth playing if only for the battlesystem
(agree with ebhz here)

Well anyway those are my two cents (again)

On a side note we have had no mention of your music at all, this could be the tiebraker

 

[Hybrida]

your current graphics are rubbery and anotomically inacurate

Great. I knew that from the start. Why do people keep telling this? I know, I KNOW, I KNOW, I KNOW! Look at this: "Well I have a crap load of work to do on maps, my artwork will improve by 150% when I get a scanner, and the Sprites OMG." Why did I type that when I first made the thread? Because I KNOW already...

they don't mesh with your rtp

Did you guys really think I didn't know that? it's like putting a cartoon mouse in a real life photo. It don't fit.

Furthermore your game has apparent similarties with DBZ:
Epic battles
Big Explosions
A super mode above the regular with physical changes

Look at SNK fighting games and Capcom fighting games. Somewhat alike but very different. My hybrids gets their powers from the ultimate forces in the universe. SuperNova StarCrystals. They're so powerful most of the battles will be located in deep space. DBZ & OFH is nowhere near the same when comes to powers. That video with Scora and Krista does have a DBZ feel to it, but most battles will be more extreme than anything I've shown so far. DBZ destroys planets, OFH destroys galaxies...DBZ: says "Big bang Attack", OFH says "Super Quantum Phason Disruptor Cannon"... Omega Mode, yeah most Hybrids use that style just for 1 big attack. After the attack, it may go off. Omega mode will be used mainly in boss fights in my game. Alpha mode, Beta mode and Delta modes are in the game too. No boobs from those >_>.

When sega's Sonic goes super people didn't say not one word. His hair turns yellow too, I wonder where they got that from?

The battles might be even more epic since it ain't dudes
Also your animations are nice - Particle effects

lol well women fighting it just seems better since they are viewed as weak all the darn time. By the way I spend days looking for animations and making them. The battle system may look standard, My animations won't get old fast. Blowing up the Battle back should be good too so I think.

So all in all your game has flaws (no duh)
yet it is worth playing if only for the battlesystem
(agree with ebhz here)

Well anyway those are my two cents (again)

On a side note we have had no mention of your music at all, this could be the tiebraker

Music is not mine, but people will have a very hard time finding out what games they are from. Most tracks are not common. No FF music, no zelda music, and no halo music etc.

I would like to say thankyou. You have been very helpful. A MASSIVE update is coming soon. Every image except my first (hydra queen with the nuke background) was created 1 year ago. I know I may seem rude, but pay attention where attention is needed. It was needed here. Velocir_X great job sir.

 

[MouraVision]

Instead of keeping throwing the guy down, I will just say this:
You have given your opinion, and he replyed not flaming you, he was quiet polite, something you don't see *alot* in this forums. So instead of just bashing the guy, you could either, stop coming to the thread and forget about it, or just stop trying to make him change his game and move on.

This said, I just say that you seem to have a well thought story, lacking in someway like others have said, maybe it all comes through in the game.
You have put effort in the game, and that's a plus for me. Also it's quite a new Idea, I am sick of seing Final Fantasy Clones, Pokemon Clones, its a fresh breath.
Talking about the graphics, its nice they are custom made but they could be improved, I don't care about the Big breasts, neither with the sexual content of the game, it might prove to be funny, think of that, instead of escaping and end up in jail, you get raped, well that's more than a motive to not be capture if you tell me. lol.

Anyway, I guess that you should keep with the game, take in point some of our opinions, maybe get a artist to help you with the character drawings. One thing that came to my mind, is that when using this super powerfull chars, I always think of ABS battles lol, fighting huge hordes of enemies and stuff.

Well, this is what I think at least. Keep going, and hoping to see you take some of our advices
Good Luck =)

 

[Firgof Umbra]

I just say that you seem to have a well thought story

MouraVision: I should introduce you to Hybrida on the IRC. Feel free to drop by sometime when Hybrida is on. As long as you're not -1000000000000% negative it'll be cool. Maybe together you and I can help Hybrida help his Babylon-5 inspired game.

 

[azrith001]

I have one thing to say.... Why are the boobs so freaking HUGE O>O

 

[Firgof Umbra]

The breasts are where they store all their energy.

 

[dadevvtsvre]

People really need to start reading the thread, because that has been pointed out at least ten times by now.

If you're not going to contribute to the thread then don't bother posting, guys.

 

[mawk]

it's called a deca-take. for something that weird, sometimes you have to stop and double-check nine or ten times to make sure it is what it is.

 

[Hybrida]

I'm still working on this. I'm fixing up my battle system. It will be an advanced scripted version of the default battle system (like pokemon's battle system). As of right now I'm drawing and scanning cut scenes that will be used in battle. I have to transfer and edit all my data from "Battle Force Hybrida®" (the above rated R original game) to "Omega Force Hybrida®" (the toned down game, 18+). I was working on 2 versions of this game. Now my focus is only on OFH now. Alot of stuff had to be cut out. Rape Escape is staying :shades:. I'm adding voices to the game. I pray I can keep the game under 150MB, Thank god for DSL if I can't.

As for a demo, it's been delayed. I don't have alot of free time anymore, but I'm doing as much as I can. (It's only me working on this game.) The demo will get here when it gets here. I'll throw up a progress bar or something.

I have a scanner now, but my photoshop CS4 is no longer on my cpu and my CD is gone. That's another $1300 I have to spend, or I can take the alternative route >_>. I draw alot better now. As soon as I get photoshop back, I will update my pictures and show you guys my true power. I will update my character data also. Anything you wanna know just ask me and I'll gladly answer... "Anything"

 

[Jaberwoky]

Whoa, this is like... borderline fetish territory here.

Whatever, as long as the game's fun. That's what games are for, after all.
I just hope the fun outweighs how dirty playing this will make me feel...

I look forward to seeing Eva's ass grow to epic proportions when she charges up.