Oh my god - Need some help here

[DJ]

Hi, guys. I need some help about drawing girls..
This one is RTP Fighter 2 , but I found something strange in her.

This is the picture that have bunch of problem.
It is drawn in a paper with Bold Mechanical Pencil.
Questions
Question 1 : What should I do with arms? It droves me batshit.
I think they need to be more detailed, but I can't make it look like arm.
Question 2 : What should I do with her breast??? It didn't looks like good one.
It looks like big, but don't look like pretty.
Question 3 : Is she too big headed?
people around me says it is little bit big headed.
Crits please , and help me to improve this..

 

[Shadow_Strike]

Question 1 : What should I do with arms? It droves me batshit.
Question 2 : What should I do with her breast??? It didn't looks like good one.
Question 3 : Is she too big headed?

1. You finish them.
2. Not fondle it.
3. Yes, no, maybe, depends on what is too big, and in relation to what. Big is only a relative term to which you have no constant to stand by.
4. You should really be more specific in what you're asking.

Heres some crit: Draw the whole thing, the reason you're having trouble with the arms is because you didn't know what to do with them in the beginning and had no plans for them. When you draw a presketch you generally have things laid out and you won't have a problem deciding what to do with the arms when it comes time for finishing the piece.

Study some nudes, though the breasts look fine, just that she has a high bra or something or other or something.

yes, the head is too big in terms of realistic proportions.

 

[DJ]

Question 1 : What should I do with arms? It droves me batshit.
Question 2 : What should I do with her breast??? It didn't looks like good one.
Question 3 : Is she too big headed?

1. You finish them.
2. Not fondle it.
3. Yes, no, maybe, depends on what is too big, and in relation to what. Big is only a relative term to which you have no constant to stand by.
4. You should really be more specific in what you're asking.

Heres some crit: Draw the whole thing, the reason you're having trouble with the arms is because you didn't know what to do with them in the beginning and had no plans for them. When you draw a presketch you generally have things laid out and you won't have a problem deciding what to do with the arms when it comes time for finishing the piece.

Study some nudes, though the breasts look fine, just that she has a high bra or something or other or something.

yes, the head is too big in terms of realistic proportions.

Thanks about crits
Yeah, head was too big for it....
and as you said, I must predraw layouts and it would be more easier....

But I disagree at some point :

yes, the head is too big in terms of realistic proportions.

It is big head in realism drawings, but.....
In Anime/Manga style, Heads are usually bit bigger than realism.
Look :
http://www.geocities.jp/ddtanan/Fighter02_001.png[/img]
http://www.geocities.jp/ddtanan/Fighter02_002.png[/img]
This one is drawn by artis named DEADIA.
this one had bigger heads, too.

and I also find out her head looks big because her armors are covering some part of body,
and makes her look weird..
P.S : I cannot study nudes because I am too young to study that and people will look me in some strange way, and also school didn't allow it.

 

[Shadow_Strike]

Oh, I didn't know how anime and manga, one of the most culturally pervasive, widely known (on tv and magazines everywhere), having their own special section at most bookstores and pierces the news and internet subculture was drawn. I just didn't know that their style is exaggerated.

 

[Cirras]

Question 1: Have one hand in a pocket and one on her sword maybe? Straight arms wouldn't look that great.
Question 2: In my opinion, they're fine.
Question 3: (I'm not sure about this one) I think the head is right.
Also, where are her pupils? Or the highlights in her eyes?

 

[DJ]

art Dump :

Spoiler: WARNING : Image Heavy

 

[munk3yboy]

I dig the new one much more than the one in your first post. :fap:

I still get the feeling you're not sure what to do with the arms though. Usually what I do is just put one on a hip and let the other dangle when I don't really have anything for them to be doing - it's generic, but much more natural pose for a pin-up than positioning arms behind the figure I think. Also the neck may be a bit too long even by anime standards.

Nice job though, looks real nice.

Spoiler: Redline for the arm/hips thing if it helps

 

[DJ]

I dig the new one much more than the one in your first post. :fap:

I still get the feeling you're not sure what to do with the arms though. Usually what I do is just put one on a hip and let the other dangle when I don't really have anything for them to be doing - it's generic, but much more natural pose for a pin-up than positioning arms behind the figure I think. Also the neck may be a bit too long even by anime standards.

Nice job though, looks real nice.

Spoiler: Redline for the arm/hips thing if it helps

Thanks :haha: That's lot of help for me.
and I saw your pics. It is awesome!


ah, as you know - it is arshes. so I suppose to modify arm poses to be more mannish,.;;
Dude and yeah his hip is low;; now, it says his whole body's height is worth 8 head height.
But in the redline, It says worth 7 head height.
Yeah. 8 Head Height is too long for him -