Oh look another one!

[SteelReserve]

I made another srceen thing!

Spoiler: Whoo!

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x90/AtomiccChild/Madness.png[/IMG]

This one I'm using for my Game :D
Any suggestions would be nice! <3

 

[Halestorm5]

Goth game right?

Its looks nice. It just needs a title on it and a reason why those people are on it.

 

[Kraft]

If it is a goth title, I would suggest maybe some more black in the title... maybe around the edges or something...

But good job none the less, you have a knack for putting random (or so they seem) pictures together and making them look good ^_^

But yeah, it needs some text also ^_^

 

[Rare]

To me it seems all over the place with no real purpose. Sure, the main guy might be the focal point...but theres just too many colors and images to look at...

 

[Mascarpone]

Any suggestions would be nice! <3

[b*tch mode]

Spoiler: The Suggestion(read at own risk)

Try something a little more interesting than emo/goth photo montages. This reminds me way too much of a sad person's Myspace background. It's flashy and full of "teen edginess" but shows no real feeling of care or craftsmanship. Using Layer masks and filters in photoshop is simple and in terms of making art like this, is cutting corners and will always show though. i don't care how avaunt garde this makes you feel, there's nothing interesting or original in it anymore, and there hasn't been for quite some time. Furthermore, even in this genre I've seen more impressive pieces. This seems to have a very mish-mashed and unplanned composition and little regard for basic color theories. In short, its bland and uninspired. I think you would do better to move on and try something new

Spoiler: The Short Version

Try something different please.

[/b*tch mode]

 

[Midi_Master]

Oooh, nice title i guess, would you like to tell us why is like this? i suppose the title has a meaning XD

Hmmm... who is the girl in the rigth corner? hehe...

 

[SteelReserve]

Well the man in the middle is the main character.

The man on the left is the villian.

The girl on right is the love interest/ main villian.

Thank you for the feed back <3

 

[The Creator]

It has too much something but at the same time I'm not sure what.
Just screams "too much" to me.

 

[SteelReserve]

[b*tch mode]

Spoiler: The Short Version

Try something different please.

[/b*tch mode]

Wow! well thank you for giving me honesty! I know it is very unplanned.
Cutting corners eh? well sure this kind of thing doesnt really require any talent, but is still fun to do, but hey whatever.
thanks for the honesty. ^_^

 

[Venetia]

Having fun is all that really matters, since this is just a hobby. If you want your game to come off as all gothy and trendy, then you nailed it.

Like I said in another thread though, photos and heavy filters don't belong in a title screen. I have to agree with Mascarpone in that it looks more like a teen's MySpace wallpaper than a title screen.

I won't deny that it looks kinda cool, and you can blend and use filters pretty well. I just don't think it looks like a title, even if you slapped some text on there (and it'd be really hard for the text to get noticed anyway; it's a very busy image).

 

[SteelReserve]

Yes I agree, I shouldnt use this for any game title, for it is far too busy, though I might use it for my Myspace background ^_^ Thanks Xp

 

[bojox3m]

nah.. it doesnt look goth. its emo! wahahaha