Oblivion ~Demo Included

[brainstorm]

Okay I was Working out some bugs in my game and was wondering if my game was good. So I'm giving you guys a demo. I know the Characters and Feel of the game tends to follow Final Fantasy and Kingdom Hearts, but the story is original at my point of view.

Demo ~ I know the Demo Shouldn't be first but You can read the story and stuff while you Download right?

http://rapidshare.de/files/31010499/Boukyaku.exe.html

CharactersNo last names yet)

Yukiri:
A Newcomer in Keron. She was brought there by her Grandparents. She's stayed there for over a year. She's Really calm, but is easy to annoy.

Jazmin:
Sort of Dumb, Slow, but easy to get along with and trusting.

Angel:
She's a bounty Hunter. Doesn't trust anybody and usually finds help on dangerous missions from the Daimyo.

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Story: Contrast. Even the most elegant things can be deadly. A Prophecy has been told upon Yukiri but you don't find out until Roovill. Yukiri has no Idea it's talking about her or that it existed. The Game Begins in Keron outlooking the Rihonor Ocean. Keep Following Jazmin until the Cut and Battle with Angel and the Theif. In Prison Beat The Monsters and get to Roovill. That the End of the Demo Sorry, but yeah that's it. Sorry but that's all I can make in about 2-3 weeks.

Notes:

Need to add more NPCs and secrets. It needs Alot of Work I know but that's why I posted this. To get your opinion.

 

[Fomar0153]

I was not expecting a 50mb demo. Lots of mp3s I guess.
I'll edit later and tell you what I think, some screenshots of the game might have been nice.

Edit:
20 mb of music...
First everytime I go to play it I get a message about the play testing script then a script is hanging error and being as it is encrypted I can't go fix this to play it.

 

[arev]

you know what? you should have show us the screenshots along with the link... I probably wouldn't bother downloading the demo. anyway, there're many things to work on... maps are rether empty and not interesting, music is anoying (changing extensions to .php... lol), events move strangely (i.e. birds on a beach). seems like another "first game". practice practice practice

 

[brainstorm]

Sorry... I'll try to make another one.... I'm really Sorry... I'll Make a few Screens after I make it...

The php thing is gay, My Comp did that by itself. I think it can't read that File type. I have like 50 Tilesets I don't need in there either. And by the way how do you fix that bird Movement thing?

 

[arev]

set the move frequency to a higher (highest) value. this way even characters with speed of 1 will move smoothly, without stopping.

 

[brainstorm]

Well http://rapidshare.de/files/31133038/Boukyaku.exe.html

It might be the old Game or the new game but I'm pretty sure it's the new one. Thanks arevulopapo

 

[Fomar0153]

Well that one worked.
You do need to work on your mapping.
And the first time round I didn't learn fire for the fight with the second poster.
And when I was in a prison (I think?) with Angel I was randomly warped to the world map and re-entered where I was and then got stuck with the wrong sprite.

 

[brainstorm]

You should have learned Fire. I set up the Experience so that you would....
er...forgot to erase that event. sorry. just try to avoid that tile. i was just testing something and forgot to delete it. sorry.

Gotta go to school now.