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You really need to read up on the forum rules for Project Discussion, more specifically:
Your screenshot is horrible; next time full screen the game and press the Print Screen button on your keyboard, that way you only get vthe game and not your desktop as well. Also, is that a quote? You need to go into atleast one full paragraph about your game topic. I'll allow this to remain open for 24 hours, if you haven't fixed whatI've pointed out by then, I'm going to lock this.
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Your screenshot is horrible; next time full screen the game and press the Print Screen button on your keyboard, that way you only get vthe game and not your desktop as well. Also, is that a quote? You need to go into atleast one full paragraph about your game topic. I'll allow this to remain open for 24 hours, if you haven't fixed whatI've pointed out by then, I'm going to lock this.
I agree that this doesn't have a whole lot of information.Why all the quote windows?
Anyway, just some stuff from me;
For starters, you use the wrong kind of 'their'. You have 'there' when it should be 'their'.This is basic english, unless it's not your first language, that's something you learn pretty early. Could have been a honest quick typo, I've done that myself, but proof reading might be good.
The 'plot' is hardly that. From what I got from it, some oddball nameless character is killing off all the 'Nintendo Characters' and teaming up with the Nintendo Villains to do this, but some 'admin' of something (clarify too, what is he the administrator of?) has teamed up with Ness to stop this guy, who is also being contested by 'Team Galactic'
For a game, you have not listed a single feature, who and who isn't a playble character, the reason this man is killing off the Nintendo characters, and you haven't named WHO these characters are. Who's playable, what kind of battle system, any mini games, etc etc.
What are the Man and Team Galactic's intentions? Their purpose?
Not every living, breathing soul will know all the Nintendo Made Characters, so a short description of the major ones you will be concentrating on will be a good start.
Just tossing that bit out there, and yeah, add some more screen shots, we can tell you have Vista, and have a unnamed game open, IE, and paint, but that's all.And also, don't post 'IM ACCEPTING TILESETS' that doesn't really tell us much. There's a resource request forum if you need it.
Anyway, just some stuff from me;
For starters, you use the wrong kind of 'their'. You have 'there' when it should be 'their'.This is basic english, unless it's not your first language, that's something you learn pretty early. Could have been a honest quick typo, I've done that myself, but proof reading might be good.
The 'plot' is hardly that. From what I got from it, some oddball nameless character is killing off all the 'Nintendo Characters' and teaming up with the Nintendo Villains to do this, but some 'admin' of something (clarify too, what is he the administrator of?) has teamed up with Ness to stop this guy, who is also being contested by 'Team Galactic'
For a game, you have not listed a single feature, who and who isn't a playble character, the reason this man is killing off the Nintendo characters, and you haven't named WHO these characters are. Who's playable, what kind of battle system, any mini games, etc etc.
What are the Man and Team Galactic's intentions? Their purpose?
Not every living, breathing soul will know all the Nintendo Made Characters, so a short description of the major ones you will be concentrating on will be a good start.
Just tossing that bit out there, and yeah, add some more screen shots, we can tell you have Vista, and have a unnamed game open, IE, and paint, but that's all.And also, don't post 'IM ACCEPTING TILESETS' that doesn't really tell us much. There's a resource request forum if you need it.
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