[New Joker Sprite!]Back into Spriting!

[xinrua]

you should make the hair move.

I was planning that but first I have to finnish it then I will edit it as much as I can.
Anyway I got the sideview head done:
http://i35.tinypic.com/2hi00nr.png[/IMGZOOM]

 

[geox-2.0]

I was planning that but first I have to finnish it then I will edit it as much as I can.
Anyway I got the sideview head done:
http://i35.tinypic.com/2hi00nr.png[/IMGZOOM]

looks good in my eyes

 

[xinrua]

Y thank you geox-2.0!

Anywho I am working on sideview and back view now. And I need soem help with the back view as you can see:
http://i35.tinypic.com/15yhizc.png[/imgzoom]

I know there is something wrong with it but I just can't tell what. If you see the problem can you please help? Thank you!

 

[Dawne]

Remember that all the sections of hair should be coming from the crown.
Also, a more gradual change from light to dark at the bottom of the hair would be nice.
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a317/ ... xinrua.png[/imgzoom]

You might want to up the contrast on the shirt in the back a bit too.

 

[xinrua]

Thank you!

Ok I tried it out tell me what you think? I also gave it some contrast.
Here:
http://i36.tinypic.com/ay0bk6.jpg[/IMGZOOM]

 

[geox-2.0]

looks good to me keep it up, just the shine on the back bothers me for some reason

 

[xinrua]

Really? So should I get rid of them?

 

[geox-2.0]

Really? So should I get rid of them?

nooooo, leave it, I just had an odd eye for things, so I cant really tell if its right or not, keep it for now, but if anyone says it should be changed, change if not then its right, but keep up the work

 

[xinrua]

ok.

Hey I finished the sprite!

Here it is:
http://i37.tinypic.com/2hgy9dy.gif[/IMGZOOM]

Some parts look strnage to me, but w.e hope you like!

 

[The Data Mage]

strange how only down has a bounce in its step lol I think the hair is a little too perfectly glued to the head, id expect a single stray hair for shape or something, even if its just at the crown lol.

 

[geox-2.0]

looks nice, but what Alicix said is what probably bugged me. Other than that good job.

 

[The Data Mage]

{ps, geox my evil internet eating firefoxes will turn your squirrels into cheap nock off gucci bags and sell them to new yorkers!} :P

 

[xinrua]

strange how only down has a bounce in its step lol I think the hair is a little too perfectly glued to the head, id expect a single stray hair for shape or something, even if its just at the crown lol.

I will make the hair move a bit later, but right after I finish making another sprite.

Edit: Well I sorta finnished my other sprite:

Joker[From Batman: The Dark Knight]:
http://i36.tinypic.com/ab6za.png[/imgzoom]

Yes I do agree eyes are a bit weird, and I forgot his chain, but I'll fix it up later.

What do you think?

 

[xinrua]

Update!

New Sprite! Joker! Look above ^^ or on main post!

 

[geox-2.0]

Its hair bothers me but I havent seen the dark knight so i wouldnt know

 

[xinrua]

Its hair bothers me but I havent seen the dark knight so i wouldnt know

Well he has a nasty never been washed look 2 his hair. It's also very wacky!

 

[Neverplayd]

I'm not sure about the Joker... The hair looks a little too flat, no contrast, and the mouth looks more like it was drawn on rather than just attached.

 

[xinrua]

I'm not sure about the Joker... The hair looks a little too flat, no contrast, and the mouth looks more like it was drawn on rather than just attached.

ya I am redoing it. It's getting my mad with his head/hair.