Nevertold

[Arget Draumr]

Well after such a long long long time i have finally updated this game again.  I thought i would give up on it, but i didn;t.  I really want to finish this project and hope it turns out great!

 

[Bridgeman]

Well I really wish you good luck. It looks pretty decent so far. The story is alright. But you might wanna get someone to run a spelling/grammar check on your project once in a while. I'm guessing english isn't your native tongue, but I could be wrong.

Anyway, Johan seems a little too simple. The generic "mysterious past" guy, it seems more like an excuse just to have another party members.

Anyway, good luck.

 

[Arget Draumr]

Wait, so my grammar and english is a bit off on my game?  woops....yes english is my native tongue. (I'm an american....i don't like it all that much.)  Well thank you for the fedback and i will try to fix JOhan.  Right now i don't really have anything for him to do but i am working on a cutscene at the moment with him and Cecil.

 

[Bridgeman]

Well I don't know about your game, didn't get the chance to check it out yet. But yeah just in case look it over a couple of times and fix the tiny errors. I'll check out the demo soon

 

[Arget Draumr]

Thank you Bridgeman.  I hope you like it

 

[Arget Draumr]

Does my game really suck this much?  seriously i need to know....

Please do not bump your project topic unless you have an update to report.

 

[shadowbutterfly93]

I don't know why but i still think you need to improve your maps :S thats all i can say really... most of the other stuff is ok
*basically, Someplaces are un-necessarily big like the castle at the start... the size is ok but put more things in there like people walking around or something like that to make the place more active..*

 

[shadowbutterfly93]

If you want i could do some mapping for you and you can say what you think... give me some maps to make and ill do it... then you say if you like them and if you do i could make more for you.. if you don't.. well i tried :P