Need Input - Opening Theme

[GameboyKnight I]

I created a theme song, it sounds lacking, but I don't want to kill it. Any info on whether to leave it alone or add to it?
Link ->http://crimsonrosegame.webs.com/sound/Crimson Rose.mp3

 

[siamese_mojo]

The bass movment feels quite busy. Perhaps you might consider placing a soft pad on the low end to help it sit better. Other then that its a nice tune dude


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Btw, are you GameboyKnight from the Neoseeker forums?

 

[GameboyKnight I]

Thanks for your input and yes, I am GameboyKnight from Neoseeker. If you ever see GameboyKnight, it's 99.999% of the time going to be me.

 

[Shizu]

There is still some space in the left channel to add an instrument, maybe a string to harmonize with the bass movement. It's an unusual signature as well so make sure it the extra instrument doesn't make the song sound out of place. :thumb: