Need C&C on this Chara

[Esper]

hi there,

i was bored, so i pixeled this Dracula Alucard in less than 2 hours ( out of a White Ties template )...

please rate it with school marks ( 1,0 - 6,0 )

I don´t post the CHarset, but animated GIF of the 4 Driection.. here i go:

hope you like it..

 

[Rare]

It looks like it would fit into a game with that sort of style...
The shading looks very gradient-like; can't say I like that.  The pants need a little more shading as well.

It's not bad though. x_x

I give it a 7/10?  Not sure how you wanted it graded.

 

[Esper]

updated some shadings and movement

 

[Rare]

I think the problem here is that you're using black for shading.  Use darker shades of red instead.  It'll look much better.

 

[Esper]

it´s dark re..
RGBH ( 48, 3, 5, 24 )
That´s the darkest color on the Set i use ^^
i just use black for the hairs.

 

[LegACy]

Emmm
You need outlines

 

[Esper]

i´ve a edition with outlines.. but it looks ugly with outline sin that size...
so i don´t make...

 

[Xilef]

It will look better with outlines.
And I only see 3 frames, i dont see the facing down frame?

 

[Esper]

downframe reupped..

 

[Dokien]

The facing up frame is wrong when he lifts his right foot up, as though he is limping.

 

[Esper]

fixed it.. but made no animation... thanks

 

[CeruSkye]

I think if you used a less saturated pallete, it might help a bit.

Otherwise, neat little character!