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Mystic Knights

This is a game I am currently working on in RPG Maker VX Ace. I know I haven't been here in a very long time, but I have been busy.

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Spell and Grammar Checker
If you are interested in Mapping and spell and grammar checking PM me and I will give you a none encrypted version to work with. If you want to voice act for a character PM me and I’ll give you the script as soon as I can.




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Scripts:
Battle Engine Symphony
Yanfly Party
Yanfly Message System

Battle Hud EX All Stars version by Mog Hunter

No Auto Shadows by Neon Black

Yanfly New Game+




Equipment that levels by Fomar0153

MOG Advanced Weather
MOG Event Sensor Range
Quest Journal by Modern Algebra
Picture bug fix script by Raizen884
Music:
Some of the music was made by my friend StormKat32 and is NOT to be used by anyone except me and him the songs he made are:
Battle Theme
Battle Theme (Mystic Knights)
Boss Theme
Castle Theme 1
Castle Theme 2
Comedy Theme
Dungeon Theme 1
Dungeon Theme 2
Dungeon Theme 3
Dungeon Theme 4
Dungeon Theme 4 Lower Pitch
Evil Theme 1 You don’t have what it takes to be a hero
Love Theme
Lover’s Quarrel (Mystic Knights)
Lover’s Theme (Mystic Knights)
Minions of Cane (Mystic Knights)
Mystic Knights Ending Theme
Mystic_Knights
Game Over Theme
Overworld(Mystic Knights)
Overworld(Mystic Knights)Vs.2
Overworld Map Theme
Quest of the elements (Mystic Knights)
Raising_Cane
Sad Theme Death of a Loved One
Spiritual Theme
Spiritual_Theme_1
Spiritual Theme 2
Town Theme (Mystic Knights)
Town Theme (Mystic Knights)Vs.1
Town Theme 1
Town Music 2
Town Music 3
Theme Intro to Mystic Knights
DO NOT USE these without his permission.
Other music:
http://www.ep-melody.com/
http://sound.jp/foceBlodeuynal/
Sleepless Stars By Blodeuyn from March 2013 ReStaff Release in Guest Contributions
Graphics:
RPG Maker DS and DSPlus Pack
Enterbrain
Artwork for the faces was done by me and NOT for public use.

Logo was done by Cecillia

Animated Battlers are edited and recolored rips from Ragnarok Online




Game:




http://rpgmaker.net/games/6130/




Planned Future Features




Voice Acting done by the members of my college game club

Picture Cut Scenes

An opening theme before the title




Here are the chapters for right now:







Chapter 1: Cyfer the crimson knight
Chapter 2: Band of thieves and a ogre
Chapter 3: Forget me not

There will be more in the future!
 

Injury

Awesome Bro

Pretty cool! I would help you out, but I really want to focus on my game at the moment. Keep it up and eventually I should be able to help any way I can!
 
I can help you with spell and grammar checking if you need. Not sure how you want to go about it whether you have a script or you want me to check through the game?
 
@Injury
Thank you! Let me know when your ready I am in no hurry to release the full game. I need to take my time with everything so I don't make a mistake.

@baghead_jackson
Let me know when you're ready to do that and I'll PM you the non-encrypted file to help with the grammar and spelling.
 
It's okay take your time. Just don't forget to tell me what you thought after you play it. However keep in mind it is still in development and please don't be scared to give advice or suggestions as long as the suggestions don't change the story I'll look into whatever you might suggest.
 
Work on characterization. If you thought it was important to put in the in the character profiles then it needs to be shown in the game. Like all the character relationships.
The part about incubus and succubus seemed to come out of nowhere. Are they the one's with the blue lines? It's would have been better to establish certain facts in chapter one as the characters were introduced. Even if you think people know about wizards and magic. Explain it anyways. It's sorta a rule with fantasy writing.

and show, don't tell, as much as you can.
the maid and butler example
Butler: "As you know the Master is away and the Mistress hasn't been seen"
Maid: "Yes, I did know. She's been occupied with the new Gardner.
Butler: "She's very fond of him, as you know."

Blah blah blah. They just keep bringing up facts that they both know to tell the reader that there's something going on between the Mistress and Gardner. When it's easier to show

Butler: "The Master is due arrive and the Mistress hasn't been seen"
Maid: "I believe the new Gardner was just finishing the hedges."
Then show the Mistress and the Gardner walk out of the tool shed together.
 
I thought I did that. Anyway Raven knows that Keldanite and Cyfer are Incubuses. So it's really no surprise to her. I'm actually writing this as a story. However each time I finish a chapter I add that chapter to the game. Could you explain this better I really don't understand what characterization is. Thank you for your feed back :)

EDIT:
I forgot to tell you this
WARNING ONLY CLICK THE SPOILER IF YOU PLAYED THE DEMO PLEASE:

Keldanite is Raven's childhood friend and that's why she cares about him so much. Sorry about that I should have mentioned that in game.
 
Characterization is basically defining who a character is. You have to convey information about a character either by telling the audience directly.

"This is my fiancee"

Or by giving the information indirectly that can be inferred by audience by dialog or action.

"Is the engagement ring I picked out too big? Why don't you visit the jeweler to get it adjusted" [quest update]

Indirectly has potential to do so much more for you. You can also define a character by their verbosity. Like, a character who curses a lot or uses a particular lingo. An Occultist who says "the witching hour" instead of "midnight".
Maybe you can express their elements in the way they speak. Like Cyfer would say Hot and burn instead of cool and cold. If you over due it it'll come off cheesy. Or when Cyfer is describing his foresight, instead of "I'm sorry it came to me in pieces" it could be "it was clouded in smoke". Or "all I know is smoke comes before fire" as an ominous premonition.
 

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