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[JosephSeraph]

Um.. hey.... I am a spriter, you know :crazy: Well,i have nor an interrogative mark or n emoticon on my dispose,so soryfor things like" "hw old are you." because i cannot use the interrgative mark. sorry again.and again.


Um.... It is a FEMALE template.




Now with GIF!




Um.... Criticcism accepted. :down:


Remember.... W.I.P.

Sorry for this,testing if edit bumps the message.I will not edit again, not for this motif.[

O_O it is JPEGed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SOOOOOOOOORRY!!!!! Damn photobucket...

 

[ellenor]

Just gona tell you one thing...
DON'T save pixel art in jpg it messing up the colours >.<
Save it in png and submit it again ^^
*hugs*

Edit > saw that you said it was jpg ^^
but well still need to fix it so try to submit it at imageshack instead ^^

second edit > alright now I see it is png so now we start with the crit ^^
1. The eye look weird cause all of the frames have diffrent ones you should fix that.
2. Then I see that the legs are diffrent from each other fix that up.
3. and the third the chest looks a little weird, like you thought of maybe do a female then changed your mind  so one of the sides got more pixels
than the other one.

those are the things that catch my eyes first, I see some more things that need to be fixed but clean these up first ^^

*Hugs* hope it helped you in some way ^^

 

[JosephSeraph]

Updated!3 more stances!!!!!WOW!  I AM A SPRITE GOD!!!!¬¬

Well...I did converted in PNG.Thanks for the advice...Photobucket transforms BMP into JPEG(i think.)

Also....Anybody  know of ANATOMICALLY CORRECT templates (int.pt)
Like with an NORMAL SIZED HEAD and FOOT.....    I can´t make one, but somebody can!

(Edit) It IS a female....Then i guess it is bad...Her legs are different because she is standing on one leg and the other is "unused"...An cute female pose!

Her arms move,i know... i have not checked if this gives a good effect or not...XD  Fix it i will...

Her hands move...I have not checked this also....  She is lifting and putting down her hand...

I planned to make an effect of "head shaking"as she walk,thus her eyes move...NOT CHECKED IF IT LOOPS WELL...
¬¬ ad ideas were these...

 

[JosephSeraph]

#BUMP#  motif:Update.(New sprite,Gif.)

 

[Ynlraey]

I think it's better if you don't change the chest part and make it look like "bouncing" I guess. The eyes are obviously flipped, try making it static for now

 

[$t3v0]

is she a catwalk model?

If so, very well done! If not, she's had something big and mean shoved in her ass and she doesn't look best pleased.

 

[DJ]

very good :lol: It would be nice if girl had normal walking poses. :thumb:
I envy your good pixel art skills... :straightthumb:

 

[JosephSeraph]

$t3v0 :Yeeep! She is that model something you said earlier(sorry, i am not english), she can also be a "Patty"type of girl...

DJ : Oh thank you,really! But...  Whaddaya mean with"normail walking poses"(interrogative quote)

To build up the skill i have i spent 3 years spriting...  I remember my first sprite...XDit was ridículous!it was an pathetic hair on a RTP woman.... I tried to make AYA BREA,from the PARASITE EVE series...

 

[fucbillgates]

I think it's better if you don't change the chest part and make it look like "bouncing" I guess. The eyes are obviously flipped, try making it static for now

FIXED MESSED UP IMAGE TAGS

Why is she raising one eyebrow??.....
And she keeps changing her mind on witch eyebrow she wants to raise.

IMAGE DIED

 

[Sonata]

Her shoulders and arms move far too much.  I also think that her hips should have more movement considering the way her legs move.