My Title Critque?

[Kodi Hammon]

Ok how is this for the Old Cloth Look?

 

[Kodi Hammon]

Hmm that is a pretty cool book, But I am not that good... sadly but I'm learning

But I could remap the book? and put the stuff and put it on that book... Thats all I can do for the Time being... Its going to be months before this thing is out...

 

[Velocir_X]

Sorry about the double post - my browser was acting odd, I fixed it so that the second post has its own value

also - its a cloth oooh - how did I not figure that out?
I would then ruffle it at the edges like so:

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EDIT:
lol I keep just missing you
yeah the cloth looks really nice
the only problem I have with it is
THE TEXT IS STILL FUNKILY OUT OF ALIGNMENT
Seriously you might not notice it, but it detracts from your work

but otherwise very nice title :thumb:

 

[Kodi Hammon]

I'm sorry... I'm not that good at Adobe yet... I can't Shadow worth a filp... so thus it would be hard for me to ruffle the edges without any shadows


EDIT:
Nevermind the upper message^ Thanks I can try to align it better

 

[Velocir_X]

Nah teres no need it looks fine, its just that damn text thats bugging me,
maybe I have a pet peeve?

 

[Kodi Hammon]

lol Out of all the Art I still don't know what a Pet Peeve is? This can be an Educational moment what is a Pet peeve?

 

[Velocir_X]

Something that really, really, bugs you...
you just can't stand something being that way

a particular and often continual annoyance; personal bugbear: This train service is one of my pet peeves.

Apparently mine is unaligned text, funny cause my handwriting used to be all over the place

 

[Kodi Hammon]

There

I had to redo alot of it becuase of the Darker spots

 

[Kodi Hammon]

Apparently mine is unaligned text, funny cause my handwriting used to be all over the place

Haha XD Mine did to but now I just have a small Capital letter for Lower case XD

 

[Velocir_X]

Thank you :D
now I can say - It looks about perfecto :thumb:
(I am assuming you will add the dark spots again)

 

[Kodi Hammon]

lol I'm not sure if I will? Should I?

 

[Velocir_X]

Yes, Yes you should they really add effect

 

[Kodi Hammon]

Ok Then I will. Lets see if I can get some more luck and it not look Terible... :haha:

 

[Kodi Hammon]

Final Result^

lol I am really getting into this game... lol First one I've sat and Designed for over 2 hours for the Title. lol Now for the WindowSkin... lol

 

[Velocir_X]

Now that is a game game worthy title
I would go and say you're done :D

 

[Kodi Hammon]

Ok since my Title is perfection I thought its time to work on the Windowskin!

Spoiler

http://www.arpgmaker.com/viewtopic.php?f=92&t=66442

EDIT:Thank you so much for all of the Help Velocir_X :grin:

 

[Velocir_X]

Np that's what I'm here for :biggrin:
I'm just glad that Graphic Arts class I took paid off...

 

[KuidonNZ]

Wow that really does look good, Kodi Hammon.
I shouldnt have left so early last night...
One thing though, when the title is used in game, where does the menu appear?
Does it overlapp the symbol?
Would it look better if it didnt?

 

[MCsephiroth13]

I'm thinking get rid of the fabric look in the background. You should have it so the symbol is in the middle with a solid black background, color red, and maybe some glowin' behind it. :D

 

[candle]

Personally, I think the text is a bad idea. I can barely read it. I see nothing wrong with one or two special characters, but the whole thing? That just screams "amateur" at me.