My Submission to HKCP!

[CherryWolf]

Spoiler

Hello all, I'm CherryWolf I'm pretty new and I'm a Fan of the the HK thingys, so now, I'm "joining it".

Please C and C,

CherryWolf, Barking the Truth

Edit, The picture thingy is working

Credits, Akaire for the jeans and shirt
          KaZeN for the Hair.
          Showkaizer for the Template.

Well, lets see, here's my second try,'cause well, I didn't do it right, and my brother made me do it by his stupid reply down there

Spoiler: Second Try

Credits, Venetia, Pink dress and Hair
          Showkaizer for the Template.

 

[Grathea]

Two things - one, the image doesn't show. From snooping around your photobucket account, I assume that this is it?

Secondly, and this may seem a bit nitpicky, it's 'submission', not 'subscription'.

Now that I look at the image, it's just an assembled collection - I don't really recognize anything new here. I could be mistaken, though.

 

[CherryWolf]

I got eyes like this While reading O.O, I was thinking on..Or Were I..Or...Oh noes!, its just a Copying! , I didn't use the little thing called the "Brain", sorry Gratheo.. Or about everyone..

Waaait, weren't that the Task to get in into the HKCP?, To make an ..Like that?, I may have gotten a bit Confused there..Since I'm still confused...Help please?

And btw, I had to change some color thingys at the sides for example, because I didn't think it looked "good" enough, not a HUGE different, just some Hueing that I did.

 

[Grathea]

Well, no, actually. There's no set task you have to do to join the HKCP - just PM Ven your original stuff, and she'll upload it.

Alternatively, you can upload sprites made with the HKCP to a section of the Gallery, located here.
Just register as a member, and upload your sprites to the 'Pre-Made Sprites' section.

As to the recoloring:
Really? I didn't really notice that, myself. Maybe try slightly more complex recoloring?
What exactly did you change, anyways - 'stuff at the sides' is a little vague.

 

[CherryWolf]

Well, why is well, I didn't like the color at the tips so I just "Hued" it to the color I liked, It were just a bit lighter/darker at some places.

Nothing big, but If you read the first or second reply, It says that I have to set it up here, and then wait for response.
... Or am I wrong..?

 

[Grathea]

No, you're right, but that applies more to actual new contributions, to make sure they're not utter crap. Also, the rules state that you should credit. In this case, it's Akaire for the parts, and Showkaizer for the template.

Now that I look at this, you haven't even used the right template.
The breasts on the template stick out past the shirt, and there are a few alignment problems. Look at the first and third poses on the left and right views to see what I mean. Hell, the arms are messed up as well, due to the shading attached to the shirt.

All in all, I'd recommend redoing this, and crediting Akaire for the parts, and Showkaizer for the template itself.

 

[___]

It looks like the teen girl template to me, catch me if I'm wrong?

 

[Venetia]

Remember, guys, there are two new sections to the HKCP Team: The Neophytes and the Sprite Contributors. People're allowed to post their contributions here to critique even if it's just edits/sprite compilations, as long as they put the finished product(s) in the Gallery.

 

[CherryWolf]

Ehm, yeah..
So I'm no Baddie?

Well anyways, its not a Teen template its the Female body (Woman) not teen.
It may look like "booboo" ' Cause I've not done anything like this before, So, excuse me please.

 

[Akaire]

No, you're right, but that applies more to actual new contributions, to make sure they're not utter crap. Also, the rules state that you should credit. In this case, it's Akaire for the parts, and Showkaizer for the template.

Now that I look at this, you haven't even used the right template.
The breasts on the template stick out past the shirt, and there are a few alignment problems. Look at the first and third poses on the left and right views to see what I mean. Hell, the arms are messed up as well, due to the shading attached to the shirt.

All in all, I'd recommend redoing this, and crediting Akaire for the parts, and Showkaizer for the template itself.

I created the jeans and shirt, but the hair is by KazeN.  :smile:
I took a close look at this and saw the alignment problems too:  If your lower the hair 1 pixel, lower the shirt 2 pixels, and raise the jeans 1 pixel, it should look better.  Just make sure to look closely for spots where the template's skin shouldn't be showing when you align these pieces, especially around the swinging arms. 

 

[TwistedDragon]

Haha, You suck Cherry, plain straight!, You didn't credit, You neither did it Correctly, newb!
And by the way, while I'm at it, I really don't favor HK, there I said it, happy now?

Meh, seriously -.-

 

[Ratty524]

Haha, You suck Cherry, plain straight!, You didn't credit, You neither did it Correctly, newb!
And by the way, while I'm at it, I really don't favor HK, there I said it, happy now?

And the point of this post was...?

@Atemu: YES I'M HYPOCRITICAL!

 

[CherryWolf]

... Just give a dam about'im Ratty, his just my stupid little steph brother -.-

Buuuut, It were my First attempt and shizzle, so...Twisted, if your one reading this, prepare for a Slap attack!



BY THE WAAY, I did my second attempt.

 

[Ratty524]

Lookin' really good, but check the arms of the top row, notice how there is a non-transparent background in the space between the arms and the torso?

 

[CherryWolf]

Well, its because' it were that color like, everywhere, so I just colored it white, Sorry :/

So, yeah, thats it Ratty .
I could' post the REAL transparent color.. But I just thought, that, it would be easier to "read" her errors.