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My Sisters "Race" For Warcraft 3, (Written thingy)

Well, here goes, Okey, my sister are planning on making something new on Warcraft III, The Frozen Throne, and she Wanted to ask the Population of RMXP.org, Since mostly here is good writers and can Write Proper English.

Well, my Sister AkA "CherryWolf" is going to join this community, after her school day, Today, I'm just doing this as an Favor for her.

http://www.box.net/shared/zfjnrwq8s8

And yes, its the Document named 1.rtf

C and C.

Thanks in advance.
 
Well, yah, Since I (don't know why) Can't post Code or Spoilers, so I decided to put it in a "link" >.<, I'm sorry, mr. Peadohiler, but its to late for me now :(
 
Imperialists

1. History

The history of the Imperialists starts by their first king, King Avias VI, Sent a Ship of explorers to the Land of Laradom.
It has always been in their Belief that they were the Only true people, that is worthy to live, and therefore wiped out every Native villager they found.
The Imperialists Build the Castle of Laradom, in the middle of the country, to show their might.
In their home land of Maram, they got invaded by the vicious Taukers, and they fled to the land of Laradom.
Kind Avias VI said, "This is just a minor set back!, we will grow in numbers, and in strenght and then!, We'll strike back and Govern this World as the Leader of Earth!"
King Avias were a Cruel Ruler that only thought about himself and his Closest, Anyone he didn't know were treated like they were his slaves, And by this the Rebels were born, the "FRL" (Freedom Rebels of Laradom) The Rebels had one man that Betrayed the king, and took his place, His son, Prince Aviary the First amubshed his father and his Escort and killed everyone, Included the loyal Leader Fargus.
Fargus were a man of Great calibre, only loyal to the king, Intellegent as an Owl, Agility of an Tiger and as Strong as an Bear.
But Aviary had to show that he were a strong leader to get the Crown.
He gathered every Rebel Leader and said; " Men, the war are in our Grasp now, But I need somehow to take the blaim.." he took a sigh and continued: "I want everyone of your to get captured by my men, that I will position at the places I decide, I am the new king, and I am the Ruler of Laradom. Obey me."
The Rebels as loyal as they were, Agreed to surrender, except one, Laradius, Laradius were a native Villager that've joined the FRL to Help his native men.
Laradius gathered as much men, Women and Children, Weapon and food, and even Gold and Lumber, that he gave to his Men.
After this Laradius got captured and got Public Executed of High Treason.
But the FRL are still out there, in the shadows of Laradom.

2.Heroes
(Upload pics to photo bucket)
3. The Ending

CherryWolf's Idea, that means. This is Copy Righted! :mad:


The story is based on warcraft...I cant say much, I hated warcraft. Many cliche elements, Maybe add some originality besides "Leader of earth".
 
Well The story ain't based on Warcraft, my sis, is makin' a whole new "Expansion mode" To it, I don't know much of it myself., But I'll tell her your Reply, thank you.
 
Well, this story IS, mine, Its for an Project, (still recruiting, if you have any skills in Warcraft III, Either mapping, Triggers etc..PM me)

Imperialists

1. History

The history of the Imperialists starts by their first king, King Avias VI, Sent a Ship of explorers to the Land of Laradom.
It has always been in their Belief that they were the Only true people, that is worthy to live, and therefore wiped out every Native villager they found.
The Imperialists Build the Castle of Laradom, in the middle of the country, to show their might.
In their home land of Maram, they got invaded by the vicious Taukers, and they fled to the land of Laradom.
Kind Avias VI said, "This is just a minor set back!, we will grow in numbers, and in strenght and then!, We'll strike back and Govern this World as the Leader of Earth!"
King Avias were a Cruel Ruler that only thought about himself and his Closest, Anyone he didn't know were treated like they were his slaves, And by this the Rebels were born, the "FRL" (Freedom Rebels of Laradom) The Rebels had one man that Betrayed the king, and took his place, His son, Prince Aviary the First amubshed his father and his Escort and killed everyone, Included the loyal Leader Fargus.
Fargus were a man of Great calibre, only loyal to the king, Intellegent as an Owl, Agility of an Tiger and as Strong as an Bear.
But Aviary had to show that he were a strong leader to get the Crown.
He gathered every Rebel Leader and said; " Men, the war are in our Grasp now, But I need somehow to take the blaim.." he took a sigh and continued: "I want everyone of your to get captured by my men, that I will position at the places I decide, I am the new king, and I am the Ruler of Laradom. Obey me."
The Rebels as loyal as they were, Agreed to surrender, except one, Laradius, Laradius were a native Villager that've joined the FRL to Help his native men.
Laradius gathered as much men, Women and Children, Weapon and food, and even Gold and Lumber, that he gave to his Men.
After this Laradius got captured and got Public Executed of High Treason.
But the FRL are still out there, in the shadows of Laradom.

2.Heroes
Imperial Leader Fargus

King Avias VI

Prince Aviary the First


Laradius the Native "Officer"


3. The Ending

The Imperials.

Taukers


1. History

The Taukers always been a Proud and Honorfull People, they are a Combined force of Humanoids, like Draconians and Quilboars.
Their first leader were the Pandares Faraam Barrelwheel.
Faraam started as an Farm boy but after his mother and Father died from an Imperial Strike, Faraam did a come back.
He went to school, studied all types of Military Strategy's and which armor is strongest against what, He after a While picked a Sword and begun the training with the Wolves, thereby got the nickname "Dancer".
HE then joined the army as an Private, but showed great potensial and Quickly went up in ranks, After only 2 years, he become and Commander of a Base, and that was What he waited for.
He told his army to go against all clans, he said "Now its a time for Tauker Peace" Hes slogan was, "Submittion or Death".
Under his way for the New time of peace, He met his only relative, Pam-Pam a lost cousin that he fell deeply in love in.
But it did not stop the "Dancer"'s will for Taukerian Peace.
It started Rumors of the Faraam, a Strong Pandaren, a Worth king,but one Did not like this, because He wanted to be the King..and this "Thing" were a Werewolf lord name Graur.
But Graur met this Panda, and he lost the Challange he threw on Faraam, Even though Graur tried to kill Faraam, the Panda saved him, and he said, "Graur, I need one that strong as you are, as my Right hand in Battle".
And of course Graur accepted, thanking his god that he survived.
2 Years later he now controlled al lof the Taukerian land and become the first king.
But the king died of illness, and Graur died aswell, 2 years after, and the Evil Labrou took his position as king, No one liked Labrou, but he were the Stongest..And the king.
He also had a Nickname of the "Dragon King" because of his look and the Iron fist he Ruled with.
After years of punishment from the Evil Labrou, after Rala the Tigerian lost his brother, Malo,  Rala realized, He is the only Tigerian left, and to make the Tigerian race Proudfull, He went against the King.

2.Heroes

Faraam "Dancer" Barrelwheel


Graur

Labrou the Dragon King

Rala


3.The Ending

The Karzas.
1.History
The Karzas, is what the humans call them. was formed by Gregor Zelvik, his physic form is easy mistaken with a normal human, but don’t be fooled his a lot more than that, inside his head is the brain behind all evil in Larador.
The Isle of Karzas was nothing but sea until the Daemon God Ukzwar favoured Gregor and his men, and raised the island from the bottom of the sea. Later Kraüzum Mjor was found by Gregor in the cellar of an Imperial forward base, Kraüzum or Silencius as the magicians calls him, he is able to walk fast but with no sound also he is able to swing his giant axes with silence.
Together Gregor and Kraüzum expanded Karzas’ territory onto the mainland, that today there can be seen Karzas Outpost along the coasts.
Nalikur Uziton was made from the remains of a thousand daemons, which makes him able to reincarnate if he should ever fall.
Nothing could stand in Gregors way to be the ruler of Larador until Prince Aviary the First stood up against the Karzas, he drove most of Gregors men off the mainland, but still some Outpost remains on the coasts.
Gregor now joined forces with Tragk Imnor, a great Daemonic Leader from Elukk or as the common people calls it Hell, he was soon to prove worthy as a General in Gregors army.
Gregor now had a chance again, against the Imperial.

2.Heroes

Gregor Zelvik

Kraüzum Mjor
 
Nalikur Uziton

Tragk Imnor

):< CherryWolf's Idea, that means. This is Copy Righted!  :mad:

Credits:
WRITERS:
CherryWolf(Imperials and Taukers)
Executed_Freak(Karzas)
MODELS:
Dionesiist for Imperial Captain.
Dan van Ohllus for the Arthas rider
Callahan for the Ronin.
Norinrad for the Pandaren wardancer.
General Frank for the Werewolf, The Elementalist and The Tigerian.
wingednosering for the Undead berserker.
WolfmanArc for the UnHolyWarrior.
Sephiex for the "Hellscream"
levigeorge1617 for the Armored Pitlord.

The models will be "ingame", Karzas is written by Executed_Freak, By my ideas.

Please Rate this. and what is C&C? <--- O.o
 
C&C means Comments and Critiques ;)

In terms of back-story elements and devices, you've seem to have fit the Warcraft world quite well. However - aside from the Taukers - you haven't really touched on the physical appearence of the races enough unless screenshots were to be provided or they are all what we know is "human".
 

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