My Sideview Battler/s ("Might show more...")

[xinrua]

I decided to show something on this site instead of being a lazy guy and requesting stuff...

Here is my newest battler:

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n164 ... Rocky2.png[/img]

("Yes it is kinda crapy I will fix that tomorrow... :dead:")

Credit to:

ganonfrog: Template Maker

Tell me what you think so far?

EDIT: I will make this a real thread of my battlers soon....

 

[CherryWolf]

Well, it looks good
Actually it does ,but, in my opinion its to much hair :s

Else its good. Keep it up, oh and Battlers usually have a Weapon :3

 

[xinrua]

no this guy has a sword his hand becomes it, when he atacks...I show it later...Way to much hair?

I thought it was perfect for my plot....becuase the storry of my game is about the kid that gets lots of curses put on him...and so he ends up getting uncontrolable hair and transforming hands!!!! so he travels the land using the curses to find a powerfull orb and then gets rid of his curse...

 

[Majiczenith]

You might want to reduce the amount of hair because it looks like he has a very poofy afro. Give his hair some depth, make it spiky or something. If his hair is uncontrollable, you should make it really long because gravity will allow it to drop.

 

[xinrua]

oh in the animation his hair grows from the afro and be comes spiky...then of coure repeats...making it look alive....for got to mention that....and sure I guess i could making a tad shorter....

 

[Mascarpone]

oh my hair ... god... ... something. It's Foxy Cleopatra with a Dye job :O

srsly though the hair is too big the colors are eh and ... well... bell bottoms. The anatomy is funky and the shading is very poor-photoshop or some other tool. I just can't say anything good about this i'm really sorry.

Go practice. Look at toehr people's battlers (good ones) and go form there. Try to recreate first, then try to be original. it will help immensely.

 

[xinrua]

It's becuase it's not finnished I am still in the editing prossess...god whats your problem i have been saying that for sometime now....GODNESS!!!

But realy I know what is wrong with it!!!

I will fix it...

EDIT: Here is the new version took some advise from people...
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n164 ... ky1of2.png[/img]
("That means I am gonna have to make a new main charecter set....")

This one is still a draft but tell me what you think of it so far...

 

[Mascarpone]

hair's shape is better, i'd recommend not using that red for the hair.. it's too .. well.. red, and u over-texture it too it looks bumpy. What program do u use to do this that'll answer some questions. Also what's going on with his hand.

 

[xinrua]

Did you read this? It might answer some questions....

no this guy has a sword his hand becomes it, when he atacks...I show it later...Way to much hair?

I thought it was perfect for my plot....becuase the storry of my game is about the kid that gets lots of curses put on him...and so he ends up getting uncontrolable hair and transforming hands!!!! so he travels the land using the curses to find a powerfull orb and then gets rid of his curse...

This to...

Removed Quote!

and also this is just a draft it's not complete....

EDIT:
Yes done with it...I changed the colors of some stufff, since some people did not like the hair color..
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n164 ... y2of2v.png[/img]

 

[CherryWolf]

The pants are tooo black, :P

I can see some blue on the shirt..
To black'n blurry in my opinion, though the hair looks.. Smaller(Thats better )

 

[xinrua]

...yep...the are dark and blurry...but I am way to busy to fix it....I am to busy...

"Sarcasticness"
Blue realy?
NOO!!
"End of Sarcasticness"

It's supposed to be like that...