My report's title

[Selwyn]

Okay,
as you may know (or not) I'm working as an apprentice electronician. And we have to write a report (mémoire in french) at the end of the study cycle.

I'm writing it on my travel to japan. So, to give it a classy look, I made a title page logo and I'd like to know if you think it fits in, if you like it, hate it, etc...

the title is a combination of different pictures I reworked and text.

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/3734 ... ortad1.png[/img]
note : it's written Initiatory voyage to Japan in both french and japanese.

 

[Mac]

Looks very nice Squall...i mean Selwyn XD

Only problem i can really see with it is there happens to be too much white space, it either needs to be filled in a little more or the other option to make the image smaller, but i'm recommend filling it in more...maybe have some cherry blossoms falling in the background to make it fuller on its content.

Thats all i can say really, other than that its very nice!

 

[~Atlaswing~]

No, the white space is cool and fits with the topic of the study...

But electronician... Can you add some technology onto the picture?

 

[Selwyn]

Actually the job you're learning doesn't matter for the mémoire.
I could have chosen to be an Optician, I would have to do write that report too.

But thanks for the replies. I'll try a few falling leaves to see what it looks like.