My personal Template

[Snowbear]

Okej im working on my template for my game. im not a very good spriter so i like to keep it simple. I have been looking att all templates in the that i could find on the forum and i like the style of WhiteTies templates. it is little to advance in shading for me (im a noob) so i have used the size of the body the same so i will find the name of the maker and credit it in my game (dont worry, )

The head is more my creation and the shhading i have made my self but i guess GR (GreenRaven) should be credited for his breeze that have inspire me to sprite and also for the uncomplicated shading i have learn from it.

So this is my try and i need feed back befor i continue.

(Big ear)Template

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y131/T ... ekopia.png[/IMG]

Plz, give me some feedback, so i can make a bether template for my game.

 

[brainstorm]

AAll I'm got to say is make the arms a bit longer.

 

[~Atlaswing~]

or the legs shorter..

 

[Snowbear]

lol.. hehe.. okej something else, i wil not work on it toniht but tommorow maby, i have other stuff i have to make today.. Well keep the feed back going..

Here is an updated version:

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y131/T ... 2kopia.png[/IMG]

 

[Mac]

The head shape looks practically identical to ccoas...just looks like a shorter version in all

 

[Ammom]

It's pretty good, though the eyes make me think it's angry...

 

[Snowbear]

okej i will fix the head then a little and post update in awhile..

 

[dollmage]

he looks like a regular bad ass

 

[xeroxz2k7]

Ser ju fint ut ?n s? l?nge :] Dock borde du inte ha mellanrum mellan benen, utan bara dra en m?rk linje. N?got s?nt h?r :]
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/2664/xeroxztz2.png[/img]
F?rs?kte ?ven fixa till f?tterna s? det ser ut som om han st?r fram?t, inte med f?tterna pekande ?t tv? olika h?ll ^^

Sorry for speaking swedish, but it's kind of hard for me to explain certain things in english.

Please note, this is just something i made in like 1 minute to show some things. So don't call me a super-bad spriter just yet :]

 

[Snowbear]

AH.. tack.. texten ser konstig ut utan alla tecken, men jag f?rst?r. =) ska arbeta p? den..

Okej, back to english.. here is an update for the walking front sprite.. it look weird i think, so i need help to get in the right direction..

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y131/T ... 3kopia.png[/IMG]

Update sprite 1A
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y131/T ... lst-1e.png[/IMG]

 

[Kiniko]

That updated shading looks better, except get rid of the big cross in the middle. It looks like he just got sewn back together.

 

[Snowbear]

Yea.. i guess so... i just wanted abs.. hehe but what about the walking one (1B)

Update
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y131/T ... late3a.png[/IMG]

 

[Kiniko]

His arm going behind him needs to get darker than it is on that one

 

[Snowbear]

Another Update, hehe

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y131/T ... late3b.png[/IMG]

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Okej this update is with 2A.. and i find it look ugly i just cant get it right.. i have an updat for it but it look kind of weaird too, hmm... plz give me some tips.. it would help a lot for the coming work on the template..

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y131/T ... late3c.png[/IMG]

 

[Snowbear]

Okej... Here is an update again, a bether version of the side. Feed back!

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y131/T ... late3d.png[/IMG]


Edit: opps, sorry for the double post!

 

[~Atlaswing~]

no no no.... The 2nd top frame looks very thin... Add more chest..

He looks crosseyed... The sideview frame's arms are a bit too long. And change the feet too...

Good progress though!

 

[Snowbear]

well, the 2nd upper frame is as wide as the 1st.. okej

Here is an taller verison, but i still have a problem with the side view.. it look like an alien or something...

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y131/T ... ersion.png[/IMG]