My new games logo, lacks something.

[Brismail]

Can you tell me what you think of my Logo for my current game, I know its missing something but I cant really tell what.
http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee15 ... allogo.png[/img]

Quick bit of info about it:
a guy awakens from death, realising he has been illegally made into a cyborg (which are outlawed)  he goes in search for answers and to get his humanity back. That is why he has written his name on his chest below his seriel number to show he isn't a machine.

P.s: i think this might be classed as advertiseing, Very Sorry! but you need the info   

 

[Sonata]

Is the game called prototype? If so that text needs to be way bigger in comparison to the logo. In fact the whole thing should be bigger, right now it seems small and insignificant. Also I don't really think you need the 8 there.

 

[Brismail]

The game is called "Prototype 8" and i was thinking about changing it to "Prototype 8: Lucus" but i did like the sound of that, redoing the logo now bigger and more understandable. thanks for comment.  :thumb:

 

[Sonata]

Ok, then you do need the 8. I'd suggest lining it up with "Prototype".

 

[Danlectro]

I think that if "Lucas" isn't in the title then it shouldn't be in the logo, but the barcode idea works pretty well.

 

[Emdejszyn]

???

Tat logo is... weirdy-easy ;\
You might it better ;\

 

[badmonur]

try making the 8 the same font as the letters and putting it right at the end maybe in a red color. Then moving the bars directly behind the letters.

 

[Lexy]

I like the 8 over the barcode. It makes it look more like a serial number.

Maybe you could actually make the background his chest with all that written on it.

 

[CeruSkye]

???

Tat logo is... weirdy-easy ;\
You might it better ;\

You need to learn how to post more effectively. That is not even an effective critique. Also, you may want to try to improve your English when posting here, as the people using this forum communicate in English. Not trying to be rude. Just be considerate, and if you don't like something and have nothing useful to say, don't say it.