My HK attempts

[badmonur]

here we go...

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[Luminier]

itd probably be easier to critique if you just posted the zoomed out sprite and used the imgzoom tag ([ imgzoom ][ /imgzoom ]), that way people could see it at various degrees of zoom ;o

also i think it looks sortof pillow-shaded which is weird because the glint on the helmet implies that there's a light source, so it's also sortof inconsistent

 

[coyotecraft]

Like Lum said, it would be better if you posted the regular size sprite instead. The pixels here are all stretched out.

Would you mind explain what you were going for here? He's wearing a mask and the colors are desaturated. Are you going to keep this color scheme on other sprites or is it just the color of the suit?
In your drawings you like to fuse flesh with metal and machines so I'm wondering here if that mask IS his face. Like a cyborg or something. 

 

[Showkaizer]

well I really like the mask so far. But yeah , the original version would be good.

 

[Despain]

You have pixels of different sizes. Either that isn't really posted at 1x or your spriting style needs SERIOUS work.

 

[Venetia]

yeah badmonur has a bad habit of posting things at like 150%. pixels don't resize well unless it's an even hundred increment.