My First Try in HK Sprite

[Olk]

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9628/rtjkrtce9.png[/IMG]
Here it is... please give your comment

 

[cactus]

sadly i'm not to good at technical critic, but i have to say i love the outfit design and colors :D

 

[RavenTDA]

The lines are very good. You should tone down the staturation just a tad. I can't really see the shading too much but you might have wondered off into pillow shading in a few areas like the hair. It also doesn't hurt to shade in the lines either.

 

[Vampiriclayer]

Looks good to me

 

[badmonur]

Its a bit saturated and pillow shaded around the cloth areas.

 

[Cirras]

It's a tad saturated and you definitely should do a little more shading on the hair. The arms are a bit darker than the rest of the dress.

 

[JakeyZombie]

I really like the character design here. You might want to work on the hair a little bit though, the shading is really easy to see, and I don't know, I just don't like that.

(I'm not good with technical critique.)

 

[Olk]

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/2083/rtjkrtdcxgu1.png[/IMG]
I fixed some things like the shading of the hair and the clothes.
Hope everyone like it!XD

 

[Samboy]

Wow, it looks great! Really liking the hair as well. The shoes could have a little work though, even though they are partially hidden.

 

[Tassadar]

The clothes still have some pillow-shading on them. It's looking nice nonetheless.

 

[Venetia]

Well, I like it :'D

The hair's outline is too dark. and the leftmost part of her skirt needs lightening, if the light direction is coming from there.

But the dress design is adorable <3

I love to see people challenging themselves on HK's.

 

[Olk]

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/9673/r ... ytyfz6.png[/IMG]
Thanks for the comments, they are really helping me to improve my spriting abilities:D

 

[RavenTDA]

I still think it's a tad too saturated. Try toning it down more. It's kinda hard to look at.

 

[Berserker]

Finally i see a hk with a interesting design. Colours are good, could use more purple in darker shades of blue dress. Also remember clothing leaves shadows on your skin, so shade them in on the template. Increase the contrast slightly on the blue and hair.

good luck.

 

[Musashi]

This is how it should look like:
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/509/ ... gu1qm4.png[/IMG]
The colors are desaturated, and it is no longer pillow shaded.

 

[Venetia]

The dress is perfect in that example Musashi but the hair's outline still needs lightening X'o

 

[Olk]

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/2209 ... fthia7.png[/IMG]
Thanks Musashi for the example, it really served as a reference for this sprite.:D

 

[Cirras]

Much better
The arms match the rest of the dress much than the first sprite and the hair is a lot less blocky.

 

[Musashi]

No problem Olk, the sprite looks a lot better now.