my first sprite

[Riup]

so i just finished this sprite, and theres a few things i think are a little off on him, if theres anything anyone sees and would be so kind as to edit for me, or tell me what the think i should edit id really appreciate it =D

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e204/riup/me.png

 

[Lackluster]

He looks emo :P

 

[Icedevimon13]

I like it, especially the shape of the hair. I needed hair like that and when I finally sprited it it got deleted. I think the color of the shirt is weird. Too saturated maybe. It just seems too bright. I like the color of the pants, but I would downplay the black in the lines in the center. Maybe make it a real dark green.

 

[Riup]

hes supposed to look like me, and everyone tells me i look emo, so i guess we have a match XD

i was kinda aiming for bright when i made the shirt, its suposed to look like one of those track jackets =p those are usually in bright colors but i can see what you mean. and the black around the legs was something i forgot to fix, thanks for reminding me =p

i actually thought his arms were a weird length or something...maybe its just me, i dunno, thanks for feedback though. =)