My first sprite (HK)

[Band-Aid]

v1

v2

v3


I know it needs improvment
I do not want replys like : ITS FLAT! , you must tell me where, and how to improve ok? thanks very much


(used WIP ShowKaizer template)
(first post ^^)

 

[WildCard]

I don't think it's to bad at all, maybe some more shading on the head and thighs, but if this is really your sprite, and not a rip of someone else's the, good job

 

[Band-Aid]

oh, the head is not mine o.o
the master ShowKaizer made it..
i only made the cloths

 

[WildCard]

I see, well, if he gave permission for the skins to be used, then good job, i kinda like it, maybe not for a  main character tho,

 

[WayneMatthers]

I like it overall, I don't know much about spriting seeing as I have recently just started as well but his boots seem too light for his over all physique and what I can imagine as his persona maybe make his boots a shade darker, he also seems like a gladiator or ruffian or soemthing of the sort so I don't think his skin would be as pale since a Gladiator or Ruffian would be in the sun more often.

 

[Band-Aid]

hummm nice point Wayne, ill update it =] thanks
updated =]

 

[WayneMatthers]

Very nice he looks Darker and Tougher. I don't see any other flaws with him good job.  :thumb:

 

[Band-Aid]

Thanks man

 

[WeaponOD]

Oh poop. I thought you made the head. I was about to praise you alot, because it is quite the "shit". But anywho, I like the shoulder pads in v2 better then v3, but that's just me, the wrist bands still look funny. Sorry that I'm not much help... very sleepy. Keep it up.

 

[The Data Mage]

I like this sprite though I cant help but thinking the shoulder pads and wrist straps look a little "inflated"? Like as if they've been blown up... I think to combat this the shading could be made a little less rounded.

Thanks my take, keep it up

 

[Band-Aid]

humm lemme see

 

[Band-Aid]

http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh88 ... tos/a4.png[/imgzoom]

any better?

AW SHIET, double again , im very sorry

 

[The Data Mage]

Much, damn you take critique well and make updates fast :p

 

[Grathea]

It's still pillowshaded.
Also MORE CONTRAST

 

[The Data Mage]

Lol I guess that was straight to the point XD

 

[Band-Aid]

aw i hate when someone say more contrast..
how do i add contrast? >.<
tell me pelase, with example if possible

 

[The Data Mage]

contrast referrs to the difference between colors. So I think (I could be wrong here) to up contrast, increase the difference between the colors on your pallets.