My first shot at spriting (WIP)

[StrawberryBomb]

After trying to get some sprites made and not having any luck, I decided to try my hand at spriting.

This is the first sprite I've tried for my game. Feedback would be appreciated.

First, the original doll that this sprite is based on:

Now for the sprite. I removed the hat and changed the shoes of the original:

 

[Siru Kai]

For a first job , youre doing great , there is definetly room for improvement , but it looks very similart to the real thing which is where it counts.

 

[bobobojjen]

Did you use sprite shop? If so whered you get the stuff?(clothes,skins,hats,etc.)

 

[Rye]

It looks very nice. However, there are some problems. The shirt looks to have barely any shading on it, the pink collar is barely noticable (though, I don't think you can do much with this), the skirt looks really odd (which makes her look like she's sitting in my opinion, instead of standing) and the shoes are nice. Simple and nice.
Happy spriting.

 

[Balore]

Looks pretty dang good to me. Good one!

 

[Despain v.1]

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Alos you're forgetting to shade the forehead. As usual.

 

[Kiniko]

Good job for a first try. I like what ya did with the hair.

 

[Ypselon]

Very cool!
But I'd like to see a little longer skirt, make it one pixel longer.
And you need to shade the forehead a little! But that's all! Pretty good job!

 

[Euphony]

You really need some darker shades for the sweater. At the moment, the sweater looks flat and fuzzy because the edges are too light and the contrast between the different colors is too low. You need those darker shades to bring out the edges and add depth.

Also, round out the bottom of the skirt a bit.