My first-made Sideviewbattler.

[killeryunran]

Well, it is just a sideviewbattler. Not complete, but I want some
people just criticies it. Please put a respond, I want to know
if something maybe has to be improved. :smile:
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/6940/meot7.png[/img]

 

[Devon Jacobs]

Blue is way to bright, and the shaing is off all over. Also whats with the line in the middle of the sword?  I assume thats were the top and bottom halves of the blades join together. The you should shade the bottom half darker, and the bottom most part the darkest grey/silver.

 

[killeryunran]

You cought be right with the blue. But I could not find any other colours that would resamble
Mythril the best. And I probably should work on shading. :dead:

 

[Devon Jacobs]

Well make it all one color style, with the lightst blue you have and darker versions of it. The darkest color should be the outline.

 

[killeryunran]

You mean like this?
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/7403/mexf2.png[/img]

 

[Devon Jacobs]

Yes, now the top of the left (not the one on the left) shoulder gaurd should be lighter to match the surrounding shading. Think of were you want the light coming from. Also the shield should have shading on it as well.

 

[GrooveMan.exe]

That sword is kinda eeeeughh.

Try these for bases (and palettes too. The colouring of the armour is still pretty bad)
http://www.spriters-resource.com/other/ ... swords.png
http://www.spriters-resource.com/other/ ... -sword.png

 

[killeryunran]

I can't check out the site somehow...but can you descripe what is so
weird about it? And maybe make a picture of the pallet?

 

[heromarcostrago]

What program did you use to make your sprite(battler)? I am using graphicgale to make mine (sprites charsets) not battlers.

 

[killeryunran]

Well, I use MS Paint. That's why I do not have that great colours.
And I am too lazy to learn how to use a other program.
But in my opinion, I think it turned pretty good.

 

[GrooveMan.exe]

Oh, the site has been down since this morning. Bad timing, I know.

I have one of the sheets saved, so to Imageshack we go.
http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/921/ ... rdsfv3.png

 

[killeryunran]

LOL Those are all the Swords of Summon Night part 1.
But thanks anyway, There are some great swords, plain swords.
I could use them. Thank you :thumb:

EDIT-I improved it. Do you mean something like this? Used the colours of the first sword. And from
the Aqua like sword to 'improve' the armor.
http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/2470/meht6.png[/img]

 

[ellenor]

Ok I am gona to help you a little on the blade ^^
I hope you dont mind that I did this
http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/383/helpingoutcopysc5.png[/img]
By ellenor
Alright if you can't see what I say there I write it here ^^
Red - High light
Blue -Add some shading to give it some deep, and do the same on the other side but without high light.
Green -smooth out the line of the sword with the other shading colours.

I hope I was of some use :P ^^

 

[killeryunran]

No problem, and thank Elenor
Your creation looks way better than that of mine.
I learned a lot from it, thank you very much :lol: