My first ever battler [Tana's Template] C&C

[Loofah]

Give me some C&C remembering this is my first real big graphic.

So go easy

 

[Chiyo Osaka]

I guess it's good for a first try, but the blade seems a little...blunt, no? Also, the shading on the jacket, near the edge, looks wierd.

 

[Loofah]

His sword also doubles as a gun, kinda of ripped from final fantasy but he was other weapons that I didn't add in.

 

[cactus]

the bottom part of the jacket almost looks gradient tool shaded.

 

[Loofah]

I made another one today:D

C&C please

 

[Mac]

Good job Loofah, but one problem...the shading is pretty good this time but on his shoes there are scribble shadows and it doesn't look right, it adds quite a nice effect to his cape but it wont work on shoes ^_^

 

[Kuri$u]

That's second one is actually cool, I think the hair is under-shaded (Well, I dunno, im not a spriter.)

And the sword look sweet.

 

[Chiyo Osaka]

Well, on the second one, the hair on the battler and on the character chip don't match up very well. Also, the character chip looks like it has blue apron-looking thing in front, but the battler doesn't have this. Other than that, it looks good.

 

[madmax_vii]

Give me some C&C

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It is a really good first attempt, better than what I could possibly do, it looks really gradiented and the legs could do with some more depth, but all in all it's good =]

Good Job!

 

[Mac]

I know that was a joke Madmax but you never left any proper feedback, so technically its spam, next time leave something worth while.

~Mac

 

[Valere]

Expression needs work, else its pretty good:thumb:

 

[Mascarpone]

The shoes and the hair are a little funky, the folds in the coat are ... not very foldey. However it's far from awful. Keep working at it