my first ever attempt at 3d modeling.

[BunnyKinx]

I know its not great but tell me where im going wrong please :D

NEW
This is a book im working on. it has no textures just a normal map. the book at the bottom is 20,000 polys compared to the book at the top with just 6 faces.
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd19 ... /test2.jpg[/img]
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd193/XcuMa/test.jpg[/img]

This is a slightly higher poly book still under 100 polys using the normal map from the high poly version with a custom texture.
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/7553 ... scrdb6.jpg[/img]

and for those of you that missed it heres the updated reapz
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/88/b ... hf1fp6.jpg[/img]

OLD
its ment to be reapz a character from a game in dev.
this is the concept for reapz
http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/1153 ... st2wq3.jpg[/img]

and this is the model.
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/896/ ... eptwq2.jpg (full size)
http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/8622 ... eptga5.jpg[/img]

 

[seita]

The thing that "STOOD" out most is the jaw. Huge, huge compared to the concept. If you're looking for the anime look, I guess you'd have to go and make the face much smoother than it currently is. Afterwards I suppose you should work on the dreads. Otherwise, smashing job my man! It looks incredible.

 

[BunnyKinx]

thanks. im going to render him again with a bold head and put the dreads in later in 3dsmax so i can animate them better. also the concept is anime but we are looking for a strange style that looks real at the same time not like on earth. thats why i did the jaw like that

thanks for the feedback

 

[BunnyKinx]

update... i did not like what i had done...
so i made a new one :D

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/5328 ... epthf1.jpg

 

[Despain]

the new one is MUCH better. i was going to comment that the facial features didn't look very "black"

 

[Fayte]

This is pretty awesome, Though the only thing I could say is that his nose is a bit too flat, but other then that it's a much better improvement.

may I ask what program your using?

 

[BunnyKinx]

im using Zbrush and Maya :D

This is a book im working on. it has no textures just a normal map. the book at the bottom is 20,000 polys compared to the book at the top with just 6 faces.
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd19 ... /test2.jpg[/img]
http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd193/XcuMa/test.jpg[/img]

This is a slightly higher poly book still under 100 polys using the normal map from the high poly version with a custom texture.
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/7553 ... scrdb6.jpg[/img]

and for those of you that missed it heres the updated reapz
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/88/b ... hf1fp6.jpg[/img]