My first completed HK sprite...

[Rayn Drayk]

I recently discovered the wowie-factor that is the Half-Kaiser and decided to jump back into spriting. I haven't sprited since the nostalgic days of RM2K, but I still got some kind of talent. (I think so anyway...:D) Besides, I think the RTP-style stuff is too compact to really do much custom-stuff anyway. Here it is, your obligatory spiky-haired hero! (Done for a friend's game.)
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc30 ... tuseme.jpg[/IMG]
Opinions welcome! :grin01:

P.S. That text in the background is just a watermark. It says "Lala don't use me please!" It's obvious what that means.

 

[Loofah]

ooooo very nice, my only problem is that he only has 2 shading colours. Kaizers usually have 3-4.

The jacket is a bit pillow shaded too. You should try working on that.

 

[Showkaizer]

The jacket is only noticeably pillow shaded on the first frame. I think overall you need a bit more contrast in the palette, and try putting follds in the pants so they don't look like spandex. I also think it might benefit from a stronger outline in some areas like the footwear and jacket.

It's really cool that you finished all the frames and that alone is commendable as most who start the sprites don't tend to finish for whatever reason. Just work on the finer details and I think it'll shapen up.